Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
To improve the quality of education, universities should spend more money on salaries for university professors.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Improving the quality of universities is one of the challenging problems in every university. Professors have a central role in improving the quality of research and education at the university. There are so many ways to incentivize professors to develop the university's quality. One of them is increasing the salary of professors. I agree with this way, and I have two reasons for it, which I mention later.
First, I believe that increasing the salary has a very positive and stimulating effect on the professors' functionality. In other words, when the salary of professors is increased, they will not confront the financial issues in their personal life. Because in most cases, employees face financial problems due to low salaries, these people get an extra job to compensate for this scarcity. Consequently, these professors do not have to work in a second job position out of university, and they dedicate all their time and energy to university matters.
Secondly, as we know, all professors worldwide have been involved in so many high-tech projects and research. Increasing the salary of professors makes them attract more students to do high-tech researches. In detail, when a professor benefits from a high salary, he/she can hire more students to do internships and part-time researches and pay them with his/her own salary. This procedure can help complete the projects and research gradually by the hired student, which I mentioned that professors are involved with. Subsequently, it can make these universities the most pioneers among the universities around the world.
All in all, I believe that increasing the salary of professors has a pleasant influence on the university's quality of education. This causes incentivizing the professors, improving their functionality, and hiring more diligent students to do academic projects and research and proceed with science and technology.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, second, secondly, so, in most cases, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1660.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 314.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28662420382 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08923763802 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6990032196 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.75 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.625 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4375 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252005507915 0.236089414692 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0896143715892 0.076458572812 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0422316861495 0.0737576698707 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160247090154 0.150856017488 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.037293919123 0.0645574589148 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 58.1214874552 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 10.9000537634 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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