Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
To improve the quality of education, universities should spend more money on salaries for university professors.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Education is very important for universities. Actually, it is not only critical for universities but also students and society. Education gives people knowledge and skills. People with qualification are more likely to find a job, earn high salary and contribute postively to society. A degree can open the door to better employment prospects since economies are becoming knowledge-based. Nowadays, universities want to spend some money to improve their education quality. So, what is the best way for improvement. Although professors play a significant role in colleges, in my view, I disagree with this statement. My reasons will be explained below.
For professors, this change will be not to improve their educational performance and they will maintain status quo. This because professors regard these increasing salaries as annual increments and they will not be more motivated. Moreover, they will still parrot the information in textbook with passion and adding some up-to-date information. Thus, the quality of education in universities will not be improved. In my causal conversation with friends and their parents, indicate they worry about the increasing salaries of professors. In fact, professors already have high salaries which is beyond other industries. However, reflect of parents show they are irresponsible for students education becasue in universities, students playing smart phone in class is very common but professors do not control inappropriate behavior that happen in class. Therefore, if they cannot deal with this thing, how they can improve their quality of education. Admittedly, high salary can attract some professors who have good academic postdoctoral fellows. However, they do not have a lot of skills for education and having outstanding academic performance do not mean they are good at teaching as well. Sometimes, devoting themselves to univeristy education whole life can teach students well, which need a lot of time.
From another perspective, there are better alternative for improvement of university education, such as building an advanced laboratory, constucting college library or hiring assistant professor. Laboratory is very important among universities, espesically STEM. For example, there are a multitude of physics experiments need to do for undergraduate and this can stimulate their to have a further understanding about theoretical concept. Therefore, it is indirect to help university education. Library is also useful because students can borrow plenty of books no cost. Furthermore, students can go to libraries to search or process some information through looking for professional books or prestigious jouranl. Due to this experience, it will put them at the forefront of new science. Assistant professors are very common among universities because they accompany with students a longer time than professors. In the top universities, they play a role to solve the problem that students find in professors' assignment. Also, their salaries are lower than professors', which is cost-effective.
In conclusion, although university administration decide to spend more money on professors' salaries than before, they would not make more effort and show greater dedication, especially when they can manage their class order today. On the other hand, there are several choice that seem to be plausible to enhance effectiveness of teaching, like adding new building of laboratory and library or employing assistant professor.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, so, still, therefore, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 9.8082437276 194% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 27.0 8.0752688172 334% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2958.0 1977.66487455 150% => OK
No of words: 523.0 407.700716846 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.65583173996 4.8611393121 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.78217453174 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16223257182 2.67179642975 118% => OK
Unique words: 269.0 212.727598566 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514340344168 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 938.7 618.680645161 152% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.51630824373 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 32.0 20.6003584229 155% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.7351329055 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4375 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.34375 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.375 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 11.8709677419 177% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262778062702 0.236089414692 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0705849440817 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051099048972 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177279240631 0.150856017488 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0491504430198 0.0645574589148 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 58.1214874552 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.25 10.9000537634 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 139.0 86.8835125448 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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