Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents today are more involved in their children’s education than were parents in the past.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, in this sophisticated and complicated world, education is one of the crucial parts of the children's lives. They can be prepared for having good growth and situation in society. A question raised in this regard is that whether are parents in modern families more participated in their children's training than were parents in the past . In my opinion, in the twenty-first century, parents are more involved in their children's education. I feel this way for a couple of reasons, which I will elaborate in the following essay.
First, modern parents almost have academics education, and it helps them to be aware of their children's needs. In the past, parents did not care about their children's education, and they saw children and students as a workforce. But contemporary parents encourage their youngsters to study and help them to improve their abilities. If parents had not experienced the past situations that they prevented from spending a lot of time practicing, they would not help their children to have a good education. For example, my mother had not been allowed to go to university, and he had to study secretly. When I was a student, the night before I went to school, she always had taught me lessons, and her favor leads me to be a top student in school. Moreover, she ever bought and provided the best equipment for me to understand all of the issues as easy as possible. If she did not sacrifice for me, I would not have been a successful manager in my country.
First, parents use technology comprehensively, and it helps them to gain a vast amount of knowledge of the different subjects and learn how to teach various issues to their children. Although some humans believe that juveniles should be educated by schools and universities, most of the parents help their children at home by using technology. For example, my parents always search methods for solving the mathematics question and learn it completely. Since they still share their information with my sister, she is the best student in math class and, if she either cannot understand or has a problem with a particular issue, they will help her to solve it.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that parents are more paid attention to their children relative to the past, and they more impacted on children's education. This is because they own have academics experience, and because they acquire technology and use it for training kids.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, so, still, for example, i feel, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2029.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 412.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92475728155 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81174171243 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502427184466 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 614.7 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.86738351254 428% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.6671283442 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.789473684 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6842105263 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.52631578947 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23197604128 0.236089414692 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0870835307986 0.076458572812 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0842438265518 0.0737576698707 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164883381825 0.150856017488 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496861629628 0.0645574589148 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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