Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers should not make their social or political views known to students in the classroom. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
teachers have an enormous leverage on our society. They influence in a direct and in an intangible ways.I tis utterly important to appreciate their efforts of building our perception and inhance and widden our knolowedge because of their indelible impact on the world. Although some people hold the view point that instructors should share their political ideas with their students. However, others hold a different intellect and may disagree with this notion. In my perception which has led me to agree with the idea that, any discussion that not relate to quotidian schedualed education in the school, should kepts away from school program. In the following essay I shall delve into the most outstanding reasons.
To commence with, the thought that the teachers may carry to their student , will affect their decicion. Teachers have their own notion about certain subject aspecialy in today political events. Their ideas may influence positively or negatively on others. For instance, the recent decision by president,Trump, about shutdown the fedral govenment was the talk of the street for almost one month. Indeed, as similerly as other institutuins, the school was one of them who discus about this subject and how people's salary affects by this decision. In one school, the duscusion go further to include the students too. Hence, this affect the students opinion negatively about Mr. Trump. Apparently, it must be taken into consideration this decision have pros and cons and we should not affect others especially young people to consider one direction only.
In addition, scools as an comittee should kept for only learning purposes and not for expresion our private thoughts. Schools as an influential department of educational improvement institution, have an impress on our children ideas. Teenagers are folow their resoected and lovely teachers literaly. Moreover, this have an impact on the time that used for such a discusion intead of using it for more beneficial things, like taking quiz to prepare for mid term exams, doing some useful acivities, and built their aquaintance. In view of the fact that those age are eager to education and the teachers should keen to provide them with aquired materials instead of keeping them busy with unneccessory political matter.
To sum up, after contemplating the reasons that I mentioned before, taking all factors into consideration, I reinforce my idea that teachers should hold thie own notion for thier selves and duscuss it in social events rather than school to keep our youth thinking concentrate on thier learning to achieve their higher educational goal.Accordingly, Ibelieve that the educational institution should keeps remind the teachers about their goals for teaching the kids nothing else.
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...hers about their goals for teaching the kids nothing else.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, apparently, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, for instance, in addition, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.0752688172 235% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2334.0 1977.66487455 118% => OK
No of words: 438.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32876712329 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57476223824 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77404981007 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 254.0 212.727598566 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579908675799 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 704.7 618.680645161 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 93.7856465564 48.9658058833 192% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.7 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209501546366 0.236089414692 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0642924178696 0.076458572812 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515443641679 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128208860458 0.150856017488 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.027584370247 0.0645574589148 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 11.7677419355 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 10.9000537634 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 86.8835125448 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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