Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Telephone has greater influence on people’s lives than television has.
Throughout the history, many revolutionized Technogym have been devised. In this regard, people have perpetually behold wide spectrum of stunning inventions. The controversial question which has always caused heated debates among people is that which invention have had profound impact on people life. Some people possess the conviction that telephone has dramatic influence on people's life, and many others holds an alternative perspective and consider television as a breakthrough. I, nevertheless, refute the first idea and subscribe to the idea that television is the most staggering and lucrative division in the world. Further discussion on this topic can be boiled down to a couple of upcoming reasons below.
First and foremost. Television is mysterious invention; a box team with people with sound. How amazing and astonishing it is. Imagine one hundred years ago when people have seen the television for the first time. Many. If not all, people consider it as a devil instrument. They were shocked and could have not believed this enigmatic box. No sooner had they bought it than the initiated to seek for people in the box. This may seem ridiculous today, but it utterly happened. People who can afford it and buy it_ normally those who were affluent_ had incredibly different life style. Since the television have been considered as a means of entertainment, it provided people with stunning recreate and roller coaster of emotions and experience which people have embraced for the first time. Studies have demonstrated that by invention of this device, people have become more and more cheerful due to the wide spectrum of entertainment which is provided for them through this box.
The second exquisite reason which bears in mind is that television is means of sharing culture among the nations. As a matter of fact, people all over the world would get familiar with the variety of precious cultures through watching lucrative programs and select their most worthwhile characteristic. They get know which language other countries have, what countries are involved to, and above all what has happened in the world. Not only have this announcements boosted their conscious about other countries and nations, but it would induce the sense of competing among them as well. Accordingly, they would increase their attempt to flourish and encourage them to make progress and expand their accomplishment day to day. Consequently, television has had undeniable influence on people lifestyle which have propelled them to go forward, and also have illustrated the pattern for their life. For instance, what fashion they should follow, what diet they should have, what books they should read and many other far-reaching impact which are not mentioned.
To wrap it up, by contemplating reasons mentioned above, all should take into account that hadn't television been devised, people would not have had such an abandon knowledge and information about the world, and also it would not be possible to change lifestyle during the time. So, television, this magic box, revolutionized people life dramatically by providing entertainments and many other efficient task.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 114, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'beheld'.
Suggestion: beheld
...In this regard, people have perpetually behold wide spectrum of stunning inventions. T...
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Line 2, column 968, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ment which is provided for them through this box. The second exquisite reason which...
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Line 3, column 446, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...as happened in the world. Not only have this announcements boosted their conscious a...
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Line 4, column 92, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: hadn't
...bove, all should take into account that hadnt television been devised, people would n...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, consequently, first, if, may, nevertheless, second, so, well, while, for instance, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2668.0 1977.66487455 135% => OK
No of words: 501.0 407.700716846 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3253493014 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.73107062784 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83091216554 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 261.0 212.727598566 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520958083832 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 812.7 618.680645161 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.1041729021 48.9658058833 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.615384615 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2692307692 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.84615384615 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150816024437 0.236089414692 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0476637586702 0.076458572812 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532608649413 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0991244833833 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0376987440663 0.0645574589148 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 10.9000537634 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 132.0 86.8835125448 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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