Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives.
Young people are in critical period of their lives and they need to make decisions for their lives. Although there are some people who believes that parents are responsible for conducing and making decisions for youths, other people prefer to free their youths for their own decisions for life and lines below will shed more light on the issues that are put forward.
First of all, nowadays, in this modern society, parents are so busy to take more times with their family, especially, children are deprived to spend more time with their parents. Admittedly, in this situation parents should accept this truth that children can should be responsible for their own lives decisions. By this conduction parents will support their children on their decisions. Although it takes time for a child to be aware of result of decisions that he/she make, after some times he/she will learn to follow her/his instincts and favors. Take me as an instance, my parents had to eight hours per day, so when I was of the class I could stay out, actually, first I did. But it impacted my grades ,eventually, I decided to get home just after class to improve my lessons and subsequently my grade got better. Thus, children nowadays are forced to be able to make decisions.
Moreover, nowadays, children are more eager to be independent. They do not their parents interfere in their decisions, apparently, they resist their parents to be permeable on their decision. In my perspective, youth are trying to show their maturity beyond the circumstances that they are in it. It recall one of my friends, who decided to apply for a bachelor degree in a university, which was far away from her town. Her parent was not agree with her decision, however, she wanted to be independent and try a different kind of live in different city. Now, after four years she is so delightful for her decision and kind of life that she live.
To sum up, in this modern society youths are more responsible than parents about the youths' decisions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'makes'.
Suggestion: makes
...ware of result of decisions that he/she make, after some times he/she will learn to ...
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Suggestion: ,
..., first I did. But it impacted my grades ,eventually, I decided to get home just ...
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Suggestion:
.... But it impacted my grades ,eventually, I decided to get home just after class t...
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Line 6, column 301, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'recalls'?
Suggestion: recalls
...e circumstances that they are in it. It recall one of my friends, who decided to apply...
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Line 6, column 440, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
... away from her town. Her parent was not agree with her decision, however, she wanted ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, apparently, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, thus, kind of, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1669.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 346.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82369942197 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55276274149 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 212.727598566 85% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523121387283 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.469344371 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.3125 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.625 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1875 5.45110844103 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318438040726 0.236089414692 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107133534357 0.076458572812 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108757895729 0.0737576698707 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196597373068 0.150856017488 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.137549473125 0.0645574589148 213% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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