Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It goes without saying that in the progressive, modernized world where we live, its really hard to say that what want to happen in upcoming the few days. However, in this complex condition, some people believe that people will tend to use fewer cars, because of the concerns about the climate changes and global warming. Other disagree with this idea and say that because of the fast growing rate of the cities and urban, they can't imagine that people will use fewer cars. In my view, people will use fewer cars 20 years from now. The reasons to substantiate my viewpoint are elaborated upon hereunder.
First, governments try to give better opportunities to their citizens to encourage them to use public transportation. We see very good air conditions, comfortable chairs, all the time available free place for sitting in the new buses. For example, I used my car to go to university. I leaved home 2 hour before my classes. Most of the days I try to catch my classes between the traffic and finding place for my car in very crude lots. Once I need to take my car to repair and I should have to use public transportation. Even though I receive my class earlier than every day, I didn't hurt my self in traffic and finding place to my car in lots. This experiment thought me how public transportation are comfortable than I think before.
Second, most of us have sedentary lifestyle and tries to find way to make some exercise. Today, it is so easy to buy a bicycle when you do your daily activities you also can receive to all places. For example, My younger sister aren't able to buy her own car. therefore, she desires to buy a bicycle for herself. Now she don't need to pay for gas, repairing bicycle are very cheaper than a car, no pollution, no traffic, a specific way for bicycle drivers, more importantly, She done exercise all the days and gets so fit. As you can see how a bicycle help her to run off from the sedentary life style besides of saving money.
Third, Even though cities are growing so fast, we could easily achieve to every utilities before. For example, there is a huge shopping mall, which buy drug, fruit, vegetables, pens and what you can think, in front of my house. I easily can use lots of things just by crossing a road. besides their costs use suitable too, that I don't need to use my car to turn on city to find me need with better price. Besides I easily use amazon for my other shopping, which help me to compare the products easily and find the best. As you can see, we use fewer from our cars and finally I think we don't need to use them at all.
In conclusion, taking aforementioned reasons and example into account, I believe that people will use fewer car 20 years later than now.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, finally, first, however, if, really, second, so, therefore, third, for example, i think, in conclusion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 67.0 43.0788530466 156% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2233.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 498.0 407.700716846 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48393574297 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72397222731 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48017981498 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 256.0 212.727598566 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5140562249 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 711.0 618.680645161 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4756310119 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.8846153846 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1538461538 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.96153846154 5.45110844103 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250427012502 0.236089414692 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0730696333762 0.076458572812 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0737556686495 0.0737576698707 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160760789963 0.150856017488 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0689838250276 0.0645574589148 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.