do you agree or disagree with the following statements?
At universities and college, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.
use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
fter a high school, enrollment in a college or university is a transitional phase in student life. Some people think college and university are important from the professional point of view and should be more academic-oriented. I believe both extra-curriculum activities and academics play a crucial role in a student's lives. Therefore, university funds should be equally distributed among sports, social activities, and academic departments.
The sole purpose of education is not the only mere acquisition of knowledge, but to bring the best in a student. A tertiary level of education is the most important time in student life to have different experiences. Universities should encourage students to get indulges in all activities; academic as well as social. This will be possible only when universities and colleges will spend money to provide sports grounds, gymnasium, swimming pools, and other activities. It is well said that " a healthy mind dwells, only in a healthy body. Therefore, participation in games and other activities will keep students healthy along with making them learn other traits, for example, leadership, unity, etc. Moreover, the availabilities of social activity give a chance to students to get escape from their studies. Most of the studies have proved that those who participate in extra-curriculum activities perform better in their class. Hence the expenditure of money on social activities by universities will be a positive development.
Additionally, universities are a platform for students to reveal their talent. Every student has a different interest. Some students may be best in academic and other may be in sports. Hence the presence of sports activities and specialized coaches at college can guide students with sports interest. For example, the university I went to has well-known sports coaches and well- equipped sports grounds. One of my friends was doing very well in football, our university helped him a lot to improve his performance and today he is a well-known football player. Thus, the university platform had great importance in individual's lives and universities should provide every possible opportunity for their students.
To conclude, every student cannot become a scientist or doctor, some students have the talent to be the best sportsman, singer, actor, etc. Therefore, education centers should not neglect the importance of sports and social activities. Equal importance to both academic and social activities by universities will always be commendable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 43.0788530466 39% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2143.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 389.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50899742931 4.8611393121 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19753839011 2.67179642975 120% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514138817481 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 683.1 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.51630824373 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.1650670189 48.9658058833 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 93.1739130435 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9130434783 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.52173913043 5.45110844103 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180620457453 0.236089414692 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0625962302536 0.076458572812 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050132929391 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131056280394 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0104459545837 0.0645574589148 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 58.1214874552 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.38 10.9000537634 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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