Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
TV is harmful for children.
For many years, televisions were one of the inseparable parts of humans' lives and entertained people by various types of programs. However, by developing new technologies such as Internet, it seems that television fade into insignificance. but many people still believe that televisions have some considerable effect on their lives and upbringing their children. Although some might maintain that not only can watching tvs not be harmful for children, but it also can be instructive, I firmly contend that watching tv adversely affects children’s life. In the following paragraphs, I will elaborate on my viewpoint.
The most prominent point to be mentioned is that watching tv for long hours interfere with children’s family life and their communications. children, who watch tv for long hours, spend less time communicating with their parents and siblings or playing games with their peers. these children are more susceptible to lack confidence in communicating with others in future lives. To illustrate my point of view I want to mention a study which was done on some families. During this study, researcher asked parents to not watch tv for one month and to report changes that happened. after a week, less than half of the families gave up continuing the research. parents in these families explained that tvs could help them to entertain their children. but parents that complete the research explained that their children spend more time playing with their sibling, talking with parents, reading books. also, these parents asserted that they want that television come back to their house but they watch it in a limited time.
Another equally significant point to be mentioned is that children see many negative behaviors on tvs such as smoking adults or fighting. after watching again and again, children may not only think that these kinds of behaviors are usual, but they also may imitate them. Consequently, these negative actions can affect adversely on children’s behavior. To exemplify, my cousin has a six-year-old son who watches tv every day. In of the films, two charters fight each other. Once, when my cousin's son was playing with his sister, he wanted to act as though the movie charter did. Unfortunately, his sister ‘s forearm was broken. after that, my cousin explained that she didn't allow his son to watch tv for long hours and chose some appropriate children tv show for him. Then she said his son’s behavior became better.
Finally, it is an indisputable fact that in addition to behavioral problems, watching tv for many hours might cause some physical health problems. children who watch tv without any limitation are susceptible to become obese because of lack of exercise. Blurry vision is another problem that these children are exposed to.
To put it briefly, all the enumerated reasons converge to the point that unrestrained watching tv can cause some serious problems for children’s lifestyle. I highly recommend that parents should choose instructive and suitable tv shows for their children in a limited time.
- TPO49 3
- Technology has made our lives better Do you agree or disagree 82
- TPO 42 65
- Governments should focus their budgets more on environmental protection than on economic development 70
- Students of a university have a long break between university semesters; the university requires all students to do one of the following for one month during the break:1. Students must take a course on the subject that has no direct connection to their ma 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 241, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...at television fade into insignificance. but many people still believe that televisi...
^^^
Line 5, column 146, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Children
...s family life and their communications. children, who watch tv for long hours, spend les...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 282, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: These
...ings or playing games with their peers. these children are more susceptible to lack c...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 584, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: After
...th and to report changes that happened. after a week, less than half of the families ...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 662, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Parents
...milies gave up continuing the research. parents in these families explained that tvs co...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 752, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
... help them to entertain their children. but parents that complete the research expl...
^^^
Line 5, column 902, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Also
...g, talking with parents, reading books. also, these parents asserted that they want ...
^^^^
Line 9, column 139, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: After
...tvs such as smoking adults or fighting. after watching again and again, children may ...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 639, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: After
... his sister 's forearm was broken. after that, my cousin explained that she didn...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 680, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...fter that, my cousin explained that she didnt allow his son to watch tv for long hour...
^^^^^
Line 13, column 148, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Children
...ht cause some physical health problems. children who watch tv without any limitation are...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, but, consequently, finally, however, if, may, so, still, then, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 24.0 11.0286738351 218% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 63.0 43.0788530466 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2612.0 1977.66487455 132% => OK
No of words: 495.0 407.700716846 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27676767677 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71684168287 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87302701984 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 262.0 212.727598566 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529292929293 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 769.5 618.680645161 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.7334769866 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.2857142857 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6785714286 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.45110844103 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.85842293907 285% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23304806074 0.236089414692 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0665937468099 0.076458572812 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572514929358 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146692229567 0.150856017488 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0225286623346 0.0645574589148 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 86.8835125448 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.