Do you agree or disagree? It is better to relax through watching a film and reading a book than doing physical exercises?
In the modern era, to be calm has played a prominent role in all societies. Because it is paramount importance, many people have always sought ways to enhance emotional situations. Some people may hold the view that watching movies and reading books can reduce stress and people become calm. However, some others may take the opposite viewpoint, and believe that doing some physical sports would reduce stress and anxiety better than reading books or watching films. I content that doing some regular sports reduce stress in the best ways. In the following paragraphs, I will delve into the most outstanding reasons.
The first important factor to be mentioned is that doing exercise makes people happy. To elaborate on my point, since people doing some physical exercise, their body starts to release a great amount of dopamine in their mind. Dopamine is an especial hormone that is responsible for creating a sense of happiness and satisfaction. So, people become happy and reduce their anxieties. This hormone stays in a human body for a long time so that they would become happy for several days. Furthermore, doing sports release poisoning that remains in humans body so that it would make people happy. I believe that doing regular sports not only improve the mental condition but also improve the physical condition of individuals. In other words, doing sports can prevent happening of some harmful illnesses such as heart attack and blood pressure. However, watching a film also reduce stress, but it temporary situations. Most times after watching a film, people came back to previous situations, so watching a film cannot reduce stress in inflation ways.
Another reason which deserves some words here is that doing sports make a chance for people to visit others. To shed more light on this matter, scholars believe that people must visit other people for making a fun time and reduce their stress. When people participate in group sports, they have able to connect with other people and become friends. Besides, group sports always have fun activities such as Zomba and aerobics. In these situations, people have able to reduce their stress and they become happy people. For example, I do Zomba as a regular sport. When I go to the gyms, I able to achieve a lot o positive energy and after doing sports I become relax and happy person. Also, I found a lot of friends that we make a lot of fun times.
All in all, considering the aforementioned reasons lead us to the conclusion that doing sports can reduce stress effectively. I believe that doing regular sports not only release the hormone of happiness but also reduce poisoning in a humans body. Furthermore, people have a chance to visit others, and reducing stress.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement The most important way to improve people s health is to clean the environment 45
- TPO 44 85
- If there s a way to improve yourself which one among the three choices you would take take more exercise eat healthy food reduce the amount of stress 83
- Independent Writing Task Some parent offer their school-age children money for each high grade (mark) they get in school Do you think this is a good idea?Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 73
- TPO 27 70
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, however, may, so, for example, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2319.0 1977.66487455 117% => OK
No of words: 459.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0522875817 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62863751936 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48776750154 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.459694989107 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 711.0 618.680645161 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.543857334 48.9658058833 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.8888888889 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.48148148148 5.45110844103 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185766401181 0.236089414692 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.057480340145 0.076458572812 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0615261177991 0.0737576698707 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123824072086 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0534937742113 0.0645574589148 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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