In general, people are living longer now. Discuss the causes of this phenomenon. Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay.
The average life expectancy of humans in 1800 was 29 years and now in 2019, that expectancy has gone up to 72 years; a whopping 43 years increase. While the reasons for this is highly debatable, I strongly believe that modern medicine and technological improvements are the reason for the longer lives of people.
From the ancient days when communicable diseases such as leprosy were incurable to these modern times where AIDS/HIV has become curable, medicine has come a long way. modern medicine has improved significantly and now has a solution to almost everything. There were times when people used to die because of a simple common cold, now it is the simplest disease you could contract. Huge amounts of research and time have been put into identifying and tackling every kind of human disease. this has helped simply the methods of treatment and also find a fully curable solution for disease, with minimal side effects. my great-grandfather and I are compelling examples of this. During the 1800s, when my great-grandfather was alive, he contracted with a disease similar to chicken pox and this led to his death. this was simply due to the fact that doctors then did not identify the disease which implied that they could not treat the disease. But, when I contracted chicken pox in 2010, it was a matter of 15 days and some medical tests and regular medication to recover completely.
Indeed, my recovery also had more to do with technological improvements and easy access to facilities. The improvements in technology have helped improve the way in which medical tests are performed. now we are able to perform several tests and scans that provide better insight into our body. also, these tests which would have taken several days can now be performed in minutes. For example, you break your arm, your doctor performs an X-ray in minutes and identifies the broken bone. he then dresses your broken arm appropriately to tend to that particular broken bone. Or you have a fever, then the doctor runs blood tests to identify the type of fever you have and treats accordingly. these tests are performed in minutes to test several types of diseases and accurate results are obtained. this would not have been possible in olden days, due to lack of technology. also, improvements in transportation and the advent of the internet is a primary reason to get better healthcare. we are now able to find and reach hospitals faster due to the internet and our fast moving automobiles.
In conclusion, I believe that people now live longer than before due to technological advancements and drastic improvements in the world of modern medicine.
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- In general, people are living longer now. Discuss the causes of this phenomenon. Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay. 76
- In general, people are living longer now. Discuss the causes of this phenomenon. Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay. 76
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, if, so, then, while, for example, in conclusion, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2218.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 446.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9730941704 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5955099915 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80658026052 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520179372197 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 698.4 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.7973356899 48.9658058833 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.4347826087 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3913043478 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.86956521739 5.45110844103 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1382965233 0.236089414692 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0403528247065 0.076458572812 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429382050331 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103567352517 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0343372505988 0.0645574589148 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 86.8835125448 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.