independent writing
Throughout history, the concept of the relationships between people has been an attractive issue for psychologists. Human beings enjoy keeping track with each other instead of living separately; as a result, people always care too much about their friends and try to build strong, permanent connections with them. Here comes a controversial dilemma, whether it is more avdanteagous for one to spend some time far away from people he loves and cares about or to try to communicate with them regularly to make the relationship firmer . I personally contend that the latter option is more rational. People's connections get weak after being away for a long time, therefore it is beneficial for both sides of the relationship to keep in track and hang out more. The following paragraphs represent a cursory glance at my outstanding reasons.
First and foremost, without a shadow of a doubt, when friends become separated, for example, by moving to different places; their relation ship will not be the same. There are many factors that lead to this consequence. People get to know new friends and spend a lot of their time with them; thus, they make new friends to count on them ang socialize with them in their new environment. To shed the ligh on this example, when my friend went to Canada to continue her education in the university of Toronto overthere, she had too socialize with new people that were surrounding her. She could not stay alone, and our friendship was not adeguate and sufficient for her anymore, since I was not with her, and I could not support her and spend time with her. Accordingly, our relationship started to get weaker and weaker.
Another eually important reason I would like to mention here is the role of friends in one's life. Note only can people have fun spending time with their fellows, but also they can trust them; talk with them and release their emotions. Also people may have some opportunities with the aid of their friends and there offers can help them improve their relationship level. A recent survey conducted in my country revealed the noteworthy statistics that a myraid of people find their jobs with the help of their friends. These connections can also play a key role in ones private life. For instance, I know many people that have gotten to know their husbands and wives with the help of their friends.
Finally yet importantly, Friends may forgot amazing experiences and momments they had together ; Consequently this fact can totally damage their relationship. It is really important to live in the momment because indeed, life is short, and one has to spend time with people he love as much as we he is able to. On cannot attract attention by getting a distance his favorite people. This is a throughly distructive notion.
To make a long story short, all the aforementioned reasons lead us to the conclusion that people should spend more time with each other rather that getting far way from their partners owing to the fact that they can prevent damaging their relationship and instead, build strong ones. Howeve, that was a story in a nutshell; actually, there are some other reasons and examples challenging the topic that could be mentioned but are not embraced above due to the dearth of time. All in all, I suggest everyone communicate with others more and keep their connections strong.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 176, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...keeping track with each other instead of living separately; as a result, people a...
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Line 1, column 533, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...egularly to make the relationship firmer . I personally contend that the latter op...
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Line 2, column 525, Rule ID: TOO_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'to socialize'?
Suggestion: to socialize
...niversity of Toronto overthere, she had too socialize with new people that were surrounding h...
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Line 2, column 529, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'socialized'.
Suggestion: socialized
...rsity of Toronto overthere, she had too socialize with new people that were surrounding h...
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... mention here is the role of friends in ones life. Note only can people have fun spe...
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Line 3, column 235, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...k with them and release their emotions. Also people may have some opportunities with...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
... wives with the help of their friends. Finally yet importantly, Friends may forgot ama...
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Line 4, column 277, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'loves'.
Suggestion: loves
...nd one has to spend time with people he love as much as we he is able to. On cannot ...
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Message: The pronoun 'we' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'be'
Suggestion: be
...me with people he love as much as we he is able to. On cannot attract attention by...
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Discourse Markers used:
['accordingly', 'actually', 'also', 'but', 'consequently', 'finally', 'first', 'if', 'may', 'really', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'as to', 'for example', 'for instance', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.202229299363 0.229887763892 88% => OK
Verbs: 0.156050955414 0.158761421928 98% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0796178343949 0.0866891130778 92% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0732484076433 0.046263068375 158% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0891719745223 0.0685040099705 130% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.109872611465 0.118717715034 93% => OK
Participles: 0.0270700636943 0.0351676179071 77% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.67132123438 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0366242038217 0.0309702414327 118% => OK
Particles: 0.0031847133758 0.00188951952338 169% => OK
Determiners: 0.0796178343949 0.0887237588012 90% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0238853503185 0.0209618222197 114% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0111464968153 0.0139019557991 80% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3351.0 2387.08602151 140% => OK
No of words: 572.0 408.028673835 140% => OK
Chars per words: 5.85839160839 5.86048508987 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.89045207381 4.48200974243 109% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.314685314685 0.338922669872 93% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.236013986014 0.251872472559 94% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.153846153846 0.174417080927 88% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.11013986014 0.112833075102 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67132123438 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 290.0 212.727598566 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.506993006993 0.524397521467 97% => OK
Word variations: 62.4672679379 59.2087087015 106% => OK
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6684587814 121% => OK
Sentence length: 22.88 20.5533526081 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.0328179914 48.84282405 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.04 120.699889404 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.88 20.5533526081 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.68 0.644075263715 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.54480286738 162% => OK
Readability: 46.4813986014 45.7405998639 102% => OK
Elegance: 1.065 1.45489161554 73% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.300154397459 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.081621780363 0.103427244359 79% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0966435958568 0.0752933317313 128% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.466134915481 0.497263757937 94% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.161356487759 0.151897553556 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.114077575197 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0781384742642 0% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.280041469816 0.336927656856 83% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0667312536586 0.067059652881 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.210909579961 0% => The content is off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0618886996521 0% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8870967742 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 17.0 8.42114695341 202% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 21.0 13.6433691756 154% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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