Parents play an important role in the development of a child. They help in overall growth and improvement in both mental and physical aspects of an Infant. In my opinion, I agree with the fact that it was lot easier to raise children in present situations than it was 50 years ago using three reasons. To elaborate one has to go through scrupulous discussion below.
Firstly, there are enumerate number of facilities made available now a days and Technology has developed to a great extent. For instance, during corona times many children were not able to attend schools but still there were able to access daily classes using apps such as zoom and Microsoft teams. If this situation had occurred a few years ago it would not have been possible and they might have lost all the year wasting their time playing and roaming around.
Secondly, the generation has changed and parents are also educated to a great extent now a days. This would help their children to a point to guide them follow prominent path in their career and thwart the mistakes they did during early times. For instance, education system improved a lot to get a idea of every area through clubs during primary and secondary education which was not possible many years back.
Furthermore, there was a lot of economic development these days. Every household is actively working to earn money to feed their children along with providing ability to educate for overall development. There are myriad number of jobs available which help in further improvement whereas the only source of handful amount of money during previous time was only farming which is unpredictable and sometimes led to drought and famines.
To conclude, many will argue that it is a lot more easier for people to raise children 50 years ago as they always there at home to look after children. But it won't help in development in every aspect for a child. They need education and lot of exposure to the outer world which involves a lot of facilities to be provided.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 174, Rule ID: AGREE_WITH_THE_FACT[1]
Message: Use simply 'agree that'.
Suggestion: agree that
... aspects of an Infant. In my opinion, I agree with the fact that it was lot easier to raise children in ...
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Line 2, column 20, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'enumerated'.
Suggestion: enumerated
...s discussion below. Firstly, there are enumerate number of facilities made available now...
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Line 2, column 66, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...ate number of facilities made available now a days and Technology has developed to a great...
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Line 3, column 86, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...nts are also educated to a great extent now a days. This would help their children to a po...
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Line 3, column 90, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...are also educated to a great extent now a days. This would help their children to a po...
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Line 3, column 297, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... education system improved a lot to get a idea of every area through clubs during...
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Line 5, column 47, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...clude, many will argue that it is a lot more easier for people to raise children 50 years a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, second, secondly, so, still, whereas, as to, for instance, such as, in my opinion, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1659.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 346.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79479768786 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51984173954 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549132947977 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4634316474 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.6875 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.625 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.375 5.45110844103 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302861091321 0.236089414692 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0838729906195 0.076458572812 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106378507511 0.0737576698707 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161758400875 0.150856017488 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0810767805958 0.0645574589148 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.