It has recently been announced that a new restaurant may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why?
The opening of something as simple as a restaurant can bring about a lot of changes to a community. From my perspective, opening a restaurant can be beneficial for my town. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explain in further details.
To begin with, a new restaurant will offer lots of valuable job opportunities especially for young people who live nearby. Positions at the restaurant do not need much experience; therefore, they can be held by college students. Working part time can help students to pay for things like college tuition, which they may not be able to afford otherwise. My brother is a compelling example of this. When he was a freshman at college, a McDonald franchise opened near our house. He applied for an accountant position there and was fortunate enough to be hired. Thanks to the salary he earned during the weekends, he managed to pay all his college tuitions.
Furthermore, a new restaurant can introduce different cultures to people. These days many restaurants serve ethnic foods, which is an opportunity to learn about various cultures and cuisines. For instance, a few years ago a Mexican restaurant opened in my hometown. I had not eaten Mexican food at that time, so I went there and ordered a plate of food. Everything about that food was new to me, from the ingredients to the way they served the food. If that Mexican restaurant had not been established in my town, I would have not learned about wonderful and spicy Mexican cuisine. That was a fascinating experience for me, which even encouraged me to visit Mexico someday.
In conclusion, I totally support a new restaurant opening in my town. That is because a new restaurant will provide more employment opportunities; also, it provides a setting in which customers become familiar with other cultures and ethnic cuisines.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 237, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...an be held by college students. Working part time can help students to pay for things lik...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, may, so, therefore, as for, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1523.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 311.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89710610932 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88852664714 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575562700965 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.5223282794 48.9658058833 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.1578947368 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3684210526 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.31578947368 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149601062491 0.236089414692 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0501485320816 0.076458572812 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0382749783433 0.0737576698707 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0962345791634 0.150856017488 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0173965290247 0.0645574589148 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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