Living today is more comfortable than when your grandparents were children.
In this 21st century, the world is on verge of the modernization based on technological advancements. Compared to the past centuries there has been a lot of improvements and inventions in these recent days. With this scenario, I definitely believe that living in present days is more comfortable and easier than when our grandparents were children for several reasons.
To embark, living today is comfortable and easier due to development of concrete houses and comfortable beds. Living in concrete houses give us feeling of security and an immense of pride. However, during the youth age of my grandparents, there were not concrete houses such that they had to live in houses made of wood logs, mud and stones. They had to sleep in the floor as there was no availability of comfortable beds and beddings. But now, we have comfortable beds and beddings such that we feel no cold during winter.
On top of that, the present lives have been more comfortable due to advancement in communication technology and their affordability. There has been development of modern devices like various mobile phones, laptops and computers. The companies like apple has developed android phones like I-phone. It is easier to communicate with others and we can know everything and every news in the every corners of the world. On the other hand, my grand fathers had no access to internet and had to depend upon radios and black and white televisions. They did not get a chance to play interesting games on android mobile phones during their childhood.
Last but not least, the recent development of road facilities, modern vehicles and fast racing vehicles has made our daily life easy and convenient. There has been developed faster moving trains and much comfortable bus services such that we can travel long distances comfortably and easily. However, during the childhood of our grandfathers, they had to use noisy and air polluting vehicles such that their every tour were restless and disgusting. We now have electrical vehicles that is eco-friendly and do not need petroleum. We now have wider road and can easily ride on our own automobiles as the automobiles are now affordable. During the childhood of our grandfathers, those automobiles were expensive and only rich and generous people could afford it. But now, the automobiles have been cheaper and affordable.
To sum up, due to advancement in technology and production of luxury products, life on today is far more easy and comfortable than that of our grandfathers had during their childhood.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, to sum up, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 31.0 13.8261648746 224% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2133.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 419.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09069212411 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92827743835 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.496420047733 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 671.4 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.0882048822 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.9545454545 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0454545455 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.45110844103 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22304668962 0.236089414692 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0601868433524 0.076458572812 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0973054499648 0.0737576698707 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138616361053 0.150856017488 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0820556808291 0.0645574589148 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.