Loyalty is the most important quality in choosing a friend
With the remarkable improvement of technology and science, fierce competition has been filled in each field increasing people’s burden. To release psychological pressure, a loyal friend always is the best and most available method to add flavor to our life. Therefore, as far as I am concerned, loyalty is the most significant character in one friendship.
Loyalty is the solid foundation of one friendship. The meaning of the word ‘friend’ actually is very easy, when you are just a kid, the person who always invited you for playing sports is your friend, when you grow up, the person who could provide his help when you are living a mess. However, once betrayed will destroy all foundations of the friendship, because it represents you have given up your relationship. Confidence never could be constructed in one day, but easily be ruined immediately.
Betray has never been a moral behavior since history starts to be recorded, without loyalty in a friendship, it will never exist in this world. Because every relationship between two strangers will never be trusted, it must be a terrible world, just like people’s connections that will be influenced by all kinds of benefits, it is terrible that people start to pursue a material life instead of a spiritual pleasure, which will cause more and more vacant in people’s heart.
Consequently, loyalty is a kind of greatest morality in this world and worthy to be applauded, as the foundation in every relationship, it is the most important in my opinion, and every loyal friendship should be cherished because it is the biggest prospect in one’s life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 33, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the greatest'.
Suggestion: of the greatest
...rt. Consequently, loyalty is a kind of greatest morality in this world and worthy to be...
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Line 7, column 274, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... is the biggest prospect in one’s life.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, consequently, however, if, so, therefore, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 52.1666666667 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1362.0 1977.66487455 69% => OK
No of words: 267.0 407.700716846 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10112359551 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97326857129 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588014981273 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 618.680645161 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.3113549888 48.9658058833 176% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.2 100.406767564 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7 20.6045352989 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9 5.45110844103 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134527052194 0.236089414692 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0613459022478 0.076458572812 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579134159402 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0929949773461 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0531257207038 0.0645574589148 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 11.7677419355 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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