People listen to music on many different occasions and for many different reasons. Why do you think music is important in our lives? Support your answer with reasons and examples.
There are many types of amusing and entertaining ways in human life to make have fun. It depends upon the inherent nature of people and situation that favors him to adopt that medium of entertainment or not. For my case, I hugely support the speaker to listen music on any types of occasion. Moreover, somebody doesn’t need particularly any reason to listen music. Various reasons are supportive that one needs to allocate his time for music.
For the first reason, music has been chosen since scores of decades ago to soothe human mind. At any situation one can deviate his mind from stress to freshness for short time, why not of course. An example of seriously studying students bolsters the idea that music is an essential part of life to make fresh. Also, a laborious person working in an industry diligently can concentrate on his work if he has his audio set on. Despite having sorrows in life, people automatically run towards compatible songs. Such songs are truly relief providing as I have also experienced in life.
Talking about second example, who doesn’t like music in these days? Aren’t there several examples that we have been hearing about parties and get together? Such events that heat the ambience for short time are always beneficial to any families. Songs and sounds during any gatherings bring one’s relative and friends very close to each other. Intimacy is an element which needs to be accumulated in life. Nepalese cultures are best example of get togetherness and entertainment; like as Teej and Holi; where people start dancing on the flow of music.
Also talking about next example, music and sounds that whistles in our daily life are produced from various sources. There is a belief that if somebody dislikes music he hasn’t entertained his life at all. Almost all places wherever he goes music follows him. Who doesn’t like sound produced from piano, guitar etc? And in addition, who doesn’t like sound came out from a bird? One cannot manifest dislike upon such pious objects.
But there might be a question of what sort of music he is listening? People might have different choice upon songs. As teenager prefer melodious and pop songs to old folk whereas old people might select traditional folks. Because of various categories of music in life we cannot claim or maintain same categories will be preferred by same group. At the case when it disturbs while reading or any event of death people refrain themselves from entertainment. At this condition amusement through sound and songs are really not good to play.
Last of all, why shouldn’t we choose it considering an essential and inseparable part of life? One can rarely imagine their life without music. Estranging himself from sounds of life forever definitely delivers sorrow at some day.
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Suggestion: Also,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, really, second, so, whereas, while, in addition, of course, sort of, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 74.0 52.1666666667 142% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2372.0 1977.66487455 120% => OK
No of words: 469.0 407.700716846 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05756929638 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65364457471 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64009627426 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 268.0 212.727598566 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 751.5 618.680645161 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 32.0 20.6003584229 155% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.8071475284 48.9658058833 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 74.125 100.406767564 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.65625 20.6045352989 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5625 5.45110844103 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181602232816 0.236089414692 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0493608639097 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493488138012 0.0737576698707 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0992831066045 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0596113730361 0.0645574589148 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.1575268817 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 86.8835125448 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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