There have been many discoveries in the past 100 years in your opinion, which discovery has done the most to help your country? Use specific examples and reasons to explain your answer.
Several discoveries have been developed around the world that has ultimately turned world a better place for living. Similarly few of those achievements in new world has changed face of mu country. Out of several discoveries, noticeably genetic engineering has afforded huge contribution. As my country is greatly dependent upon export and import of agricultural commodities, national gross domestic has led an addendum in national revenue for several past decades in my nation.
Initially, genetic engineering through manipulation of genes on living beings, scientist and pundits has altered the traits of plants and animals so that they can achieve desired characters on them. Farmers who cultivate drought tolerant varieties during low rainfall season in my nation are satisfied greatly with such varieties. Severely destitute farmers of remote areas who often lack resources and water to irrigate are best beneficiaries of this advancement. Moreover disease resistant varieties of cereal crops, fruits, and flowers have been introduced at various parts of country by the government, which are boons of the genetic discoveries.
Secondly, discoveries have pulled country very much ahead in development of animal sector. For instance, idea of artificial insemination has made animal fertilization significantly easy and quick to farmers of hilly areas those who are unable to move several miles away in search of compatible animal. Here in this case, time and labor are saved facilitating agrarian people for further adoption of process. Except few people who are well- off to manage their own huge farm possess generally required resources to fulfill their needs.
Thirdly, the concept of genetic engineering in the country like mine has brought tremendous scope being subject matter of study. For many agricultural scientists it has turned out to be an intriguing subject to research. Moreover, successfully country has established research stations in many locations for various types of crops. A yearly data of students enrollment in genetic engineering manifests best example of serious kinship and desire upon the agricultural area.
So many discoveries has led improvement in my nation keeping high scope in imminent future. Attraction of people towards the subject due to its blessings upon country is still the same since years ago. Such discoveries has provided ineffable chance to export to other country, which has became a genuine reason to maintain international relation amongst other country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Similarly,
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Suggestion: are the best
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Suggestion: Moreover,
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Suggestion: have; haven
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, second, secondly, similarly, so, still, third, thirdly, well, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 43.0788530466 39% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2142.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 383.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59268929504 4.8611393121 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91791548671 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610966057441 0.524837075471 116% => OK
syllable_count: 682.2 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.51630824373 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.59856630824 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2984179194 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.736842105 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1578947368 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.89473684211 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127070390741 0.236089414692 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0382215029381 0.076458572812 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0402044524564 0.0737576698707 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0709343728755 0.150856017488 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032100693136 0.0645574589148 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 58.1214874552 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 10.1575268817 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 10.9000537634 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.82 8.01818996416 122% => OK
difficult_words: 126.0 86.8835125448 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.