Some people prefer to live in the country. Others prefer to live in a town or big cities. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Since the dawn of humanity, human beings have been looking for appropriate and convenient accommodation, be it a cave in the heart of the jungle, a cozy cottage in the countryside, or a luxury house in a metropolitan skyscraper. Despite many people who are keen to live in the country, I think living in the town outweighs residing in the suburb. I incline to city life for various reasons: the issues of facility, opportunity, and entertainment, to name but a few.
First and foremost, the facility and accessibility provided in the town have tempted even inhabitants of villages, despite their inner desire to migrate into a big city. With the advent of technology, humankind has enjoyed a more convenient way of living, which cannot be ignored at the expense of a healthy-village-life. People’s means of communication has experienced a dramatic change thanks to the internet through which not only can people interact, but also they can do their shopping as easy as possible. Furthermore, the establishment of numerous highly equipped hospitals and clinics in big cities can be considered as a precious facility that every citizen can privilege its benefit. While the dwellers of the big city can be favored with various modes of transportations that simplify and accelerate transportation, people in the countryside are deprived of this invaluable accessibility.
Another privilege of city life can be attributed to the full range of opportunities and career varieties. Each person is born with a wealth of talent; the blooming of them depends on the environment that he/she resides. It is no secret that this situation is the best place for the person to recognize what his or her talent is, and he can pursue his career accordingly. However, the most prominent jobs inside a village are either animal husbandry or farming, which are somewhat of a family job that is somehow inherited from the ancestors. In this case, without knowing one’s talent, the majority of people have no options but to follow the job of their antecedents. It is obvious that the more challenges and difficulties a person encounters in his life, the more experts and professional individuals are needed to solve those challenges. It stands to reasons that in a society full of new demands, a person’s talents can be easily flourished.
In today’s society, people seem to become more capricious, which means one repetitive thing cannot satisfy their wants, and thus they seek for new hobbies and entertainments to spend their leisure time. Living in a big city is a better place for such people since it can bring about a variety of attractions and amusements. Although countryside people can indeed enjoy the beautiful nature, it is not quenching the city residents’ wishes. Museums, parks, cinemas, theaters, and playgrounds are among the few recreational places that people can enjoy spending their time in them.
In summary, with all this taken into account, I believe the city rather than the country can be an ideal place to live on the ground that it has a wide range of facilities and accessibility, opportunities and job offers, and more entertainment provided to the citizens. With all these advantages of living in big cities, is there still anyone who prefers living in the countryside just for consolation?
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, look, so, still, thus, well, while, i think, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 75.0 52.1666666667 144% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2769.0 1977.66487455 140% => OK
No of words: 544.0 407.700716846 133% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09007352941 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82947280553 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11185763702 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Unique words: 289.0 212.727598566 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53125 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 887.4 618.680645161 143% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.4505479065 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.857142857 100.406767564 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9047619048 20.6045352989 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17265396783 0.236089414692 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0519650223868 0.076458572812 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559852415765 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102703048876 0.150856017488 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.04867888637 0.0645574589148 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 11.7677419355 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 151.0 86.8835125448 174% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, look, so, still, thus, well, while, i think, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 75.0 52.1666666667 144% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2769.0 1977.66487455 140% => OK
No of words: 544.0 407.700716846 133% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09007352941 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82947280553 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11185763702 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Unique words: 289.0 212.727598566 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53125 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 887.4 618.680645161 143% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.4505479065 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.857142857 100.406767564 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9047619048 20.6045352989 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17265396783 0.236089414692 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0519650223868 0.076458572812 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559852415765 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102703048876 0.150856017488 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.04867888637 0.0645574589148 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 11.7677419355 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 151.0 86.8835125448 174% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.