Some people say that Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with?
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Technology of today's world is so advanced that people easily access valuable information through the world. The Internet provides this opportunity to exchange the information and because of the internet today's world is called a global village. However, some people think that the internet actually creates a problem but other people do not agree with the statement. Not surprisingly, the number of controversies over this issue is overwhelming. Among that controversy, I agree with the second choice and I will provide several elaborations for holding this aspect.
First and foremost, the internet is the easy way to get information about the history, novel, recent science, politics etc. Moreover, by using it people can share data, picture, thoughts and also can connect to the other side of the world frequently. It is also essential for studying and easily get through the studying materials. For instance, before the invention of internet student spends lots of time in the library for getting information from book, journals, newspaper etc. But, today it is so easy that they can get this material at home by searching on google. Besides, students can also leave their valuable comments on that information. If any student does not understand any topic they can easily get the teacher's lecture which was not possible in past. When I was an undergraduate student sometimes I fall sick and some of the lecture missed. But, my course teachers uploaded their lecture video on the internet and it pretty helpful for me to understand the whole concept.
Furthermore, the internet is a place where anyone can connect with others through e-mails, social apps, Skype etc which was not possible only a few decades ago. For particular, my brother has lived in the USA for 20 years. I listen from my parents that when he went to the USA it was difficult for them to connect with. That time the land phone was available in the city but not the villages. So, they waited for a phone call besides the phone for hours to hours. But, now the internet is so accessible not only in the city but also in the village that we can smoothly connect with him.
However, over sharing of personal information sometimes harmful to private life. Some illegal people stalk and try to destroy the person's reputation. Sometimes they hack and spread bad images and steal personal data.
To recapitulate, the necessary of the internet is pretty obvious and also important for our everyday life. But, always try to use this benefit in good purposes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'peoples'?
Suggestion: peoples
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... valuable comments on that information. If any student does not understand any top...
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the past'?
Suggestion: in the past
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
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Message: Did you mean 'pretties'?
Suggestion: pretties
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...gal people stalk and try to destroy the persons reputation. Sometimes they hack and spr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2118.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 424.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99528301887 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63968518544 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509433962264 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 661.5 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.7590264091 48.9658058833 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.72 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.96 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.88 5.45110844103 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219999406806 0.236089414692 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0606195054389 0.076458572812 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0810477625272 0.0737576698707 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119118741113 0.150856017488 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0966599065834 0.0645574589148 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.