Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past that they were nowadays.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Currently, society has witnessed an unprecedented accumulation of material affluence, thus city dwellers are attaching more importance to education. A myriad of individuals harbor the idea that teachers are not appreciated by society compared to the past, while other contends that teachers are still well-respected more than ever before. Personally speaking, I do concur with the former view and this can be substantiated as follows.
To start with, nowadays, with the emergence of advanced technology, teachers are not the mere authorities existing in the students' world. To be more specific, students, equipped with electronic devices, are inclined to amass theoretical knowledge from varieties of approaches, like the online database or other platforms. What they can attain from those approaches is more profound than the knowledge imparted by their teachers, hence they show less respect for their teachers. Meanwhile, in modern society, students are apt to accumulate more pragmatic knowledge, however, those teachers, without sufficient time to update their knowledge reserve, fail to reach out their hands to answer this kind of questions, which makes students reckon that their teachers are not eminent enough and they are not worthy of esteeming. The research conducted to evaluate students' attitude toward their teachers demonstrates that 88% students contend that although their teachers are hard-working, they do not think they are well-respected due to teachers' lack in some specialized knowledge, especially those students who are geared toward specific domains of a subject to participate academic competitions. This data illuminates that with the advancement of technology, students are resorting to other methods of amassing information, therefore it is self-evident that the status of teachers is declining.
What's more, the declining thresholds is another cause of the less appreciation toward teachers. With the prosperity in the education industry, there is an increasing number of educational institutions continuously emerging, which are varied in qualities. Hence, people from all walks of lives, without any qualification or thresholds, are entitled to enter such institutions to become teachers to offer guidance not only in academic performance but also in some other domains, like learning of foreign languages, studying abroad or others. However, not all of them are qualified enough to become teachers, those so-called teachers without sufficient accumulation of knowledge tarnish the reputation of teachers and leave a bad impression on some individuals, which is self-evident that why teachers are not valued by the general public compared to the past. Meanwhile, the corrupt existing in parts of teachers also exert detrimental effects on the public's impression toward teachers. Concretely, a bunch of teachers, due to their moral decline and desire for wealth, asking their students' parents to give them more money or other gifts, which makes parents reckon that it is unfair and disrupts the regular teaching disciplines. However, forced by their fear of teachers’ revenge toward their tender children, they have to abide with teachers’ requires without any struggle.
Admittedly, some of students and adults are still showing enough respect for teachers, however, they do not behave as students in ancient history to regard teachers as their parents for life long period.
In a nutshell, from what has been mentioned above, teachers are not appreciated and cherished by society nowadays than in the past. For one thing, students are rendered with diversified approaches to studying. For another, the declined threshold of being a teacher does exert detrimental to teachers' reputation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, still, therefore, thus, well, while, kind of, for one thing, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 15.1003584229 199% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 93.0 52.1666666667 178% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3176.0 1977.66487455 161% => OK
No of words: 561.0 407.700716846 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.66131907308 4.8611393121 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.86676880123 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02753779673 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 282.0 212.727598566 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502673796791 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 972.9 618.680645161 157% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.0430460665 48.9658058833 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 158.8 100.406767564 158% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.05 20.6045352989 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.45 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175080089431 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0598661097916 0.076458572812 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0461766909466 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108966443752 0.150856017488 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0345039902654 0.0645574589148 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.3 11.7677419355 164% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 58.1214874552 60% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.1575268817 152% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.84 10.9000537634 145% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.01818996416 122% => OK
difficult_words: 170.0 86.8835125448 196% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.002688172 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.247311828 156% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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