TPO - 16
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide.
Trave is Always good, but is better when you can do everthing that you want to do. Therefore, I don’t agree with this statement that the best way to travel is a group led by a tour guide. And I have two reason to reforce my opinions.
First, is more expencive travel with a tour guide. Since that the people need pay for tour guide, the travel get more expensive. For example, in last year, I went to the beatch with my girlfriend, and we were looking for a tour guid to show the place for us. We find one that got we for differents places, however we spent a lot money. After that, I could see that is not always the tour guide is good because we didn’t see the beach that we wanted, and I get very desapointed.
Second, people who travel with a tour guide, don’t have privacity. Since that people much time want to do the tour in a way that the tour guide doesn’t do, and sometimes this make the people a little sad. For instance, my friend Wanessa, traveled with his husband (Henrique), in this trevel that I am saying they were not merried yet. Hanrique was wanting to aky if Wanessa want get married with him, bus always have people near and he didn’t have a good time to ask this for her. Therefore, Henriqeu needed wait the night to ask to Wanessa. He tould me that never again he travel with a tour guide.
However, how all in this life have contrast, there are some good poits to travel with a tour guide. Since the tour meet a lot of the places, they can say where you find somethink to you buy, where is the cheaper restaurant, wher is the best place to you stay and others things. Authough, I prefer have my privacity and make things that I want to do, because I always want fell fredoon.
In conlusion, I don’t agree with this statement and i think that is best travel alone and without tour guide, since that you fill free and can go to anywhere in your own time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...verthing that you want to do. Therefore, I don't agree with this statement t...
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...ing they were not merried yet. Hanrique was wanting to aky if Wanessa want get married with...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...on't agree with this statement and i think that is best travel alone and wit...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd can go to anywhere in your own time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, second, so, therefore, for example, for instance, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 43.0788530466 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1570.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 360.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.36111111111 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28223818019 2.67179642975 85% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.472222222222 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 476.1 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6810715841 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.2222222222 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88888888889 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312789693744 0.236089414692 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120883193869 0.076458572812 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12996221451 0.0737576698707 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218477466142 0.150856017488 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.087994795557 0.0645574589148 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 58.1214874552 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.01 10.9000537634 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.69 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 86.8835125448 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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