TPO 27- independent writing
What to choose for a career may be one of the biggest decisions of one's life and usually the future of that person depends on it. Although, some people may prefer job satisfaction over security, I believe a secure job is more important and when facing an opportunity to get one, you should not hesitate. I believe so for three reasons; giving the job a chance, finding another sources of satisfaction, and choosing it as a temporary one.
The first reason I hold for agreeing on taking advantage of the chance of a secure job as it happen is that I believe you should give it a chance. As they say, "never judge a book by its cover". It means that at first glance, the available job may not look satisfying to you but if you give it a chance you may find it satisfying and experience the job security and satisfaction at the same time.
Secondly, you can look for other sources of satisfaction outside of your work environment. Since it is not easy to find a secured job, I believe that when encountering one, you should accept it and fill out the empty place of satisfaction in your life with other sources. For example a person who enjoys painting, may never find job security in theirs desired major so they can have a job and do the painting as a hobby.
Finally, the job could be a temporary option for that person. If you are sure that you will not find job satisfaction in the current job, you can accept it and meanwhile look for the job that satisfies you. In my opinion, we never should stop trying to get better and have better positions in our lives, so this job could be your temporary one and that way you have enough time to look for what you really enjoy.
To sum up, it is important to take advantage of the opportunities showing up in front of us for a couple of reasons. Giving the job opportunity a chance, finding satisfaction outside of the job, and choosing it as a temporary option are the reasons I hold for my opinion.
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- TPO 27 independent writing 7
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 68, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... may be one of the biggest decisions of ones life and usually the future of that per...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, look, may, really, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1604.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 362.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.43093922652 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63952119303 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.447513812155 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 520.2 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.1468444801 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.571428571 100.406767564 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8571428571 20.6045352989 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85714285714 5.45110844103 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.236089414692 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.076458572812 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150856017488 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.71 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 86.8835125448 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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