TPO 28 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Parents today are more involved in their children’s education than were parents in the past.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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TPO 28 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

Parents today are more involved in their children’s education than were parents in the past.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Take attention to children's education is very important part of our lives because their education can have essential effects on their future. Some people think that parents today are more involved in their children's education than were parents in the past; others disagree. In my view it is true that today parents take more attention to their children's education in comparison with the past.

First, I think that in the past many parents have a lot of children, so they did not have enough time to spend on each children. Moreover, they were so distracted with their hard works that they often forgot their children's education. For example, my grandmother told me that when she was in elementary school, her parents did not know which class she was, and they do not take attention to her grades, and they did not talk to her teachers even for one time. She said that she had 7 brothers and sisters, and his parents were worried about their food and cloths, they did not care about anything else because they did not have time for it. As you can see in the past, parents did not involve in children's education in comparison with today.

Second, Nowadays many people have one or two children, so they have a lot of time to spend on them. With this extra time parents can get involved in their children's education more. For example, I remember when I was in elementary school my parents took a lot of attention about my education. My mother went to my school every two weeks and talked with my teachers about my grades. She bought me a lot of extra books to study better and get better grades, moreover she tried to ask me a lot of questions before my exams to see if I was ready or not . She thought that she can affect my future by doing those works. Not only my parents did such things, my friend's parents did them too. So today parents are more involved in their children's education than were parents in the past.

In sum, though some may disagree, I think parents today are more involved in their children's education than were parents in the past, not only because parents in the past had a lot of children and had a lot of hard works to do,and did not have enough time to spend on their children's education but also new parents have a lot of extra time to spend on their children because they have few children, and they think they can be effective in their children's lives.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 548, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...re my exams to see if I was ready or not . She thought that she can affect my futu...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , and
...ildren and had a lot of hard works to do,and did not have enough time to spend on th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, moreover, second, so, for example, i think, in my view, it is true

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 71.0 43.0788530466 165% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1959.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 434.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51382488479 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56428161445 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29147552621 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.382488479263 0.524837075471 73% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 595.8 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.0852729439 48.9658058833 184% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.235294118 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5294117647 20.6045352989 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.47058823529 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310903493433 0.236089414692 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.160849325816 0.076458572812 210% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.147019304364 0.0737576698707 199% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.255969711303 0.150856017488 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0733750711628 0.0645574589148 114% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.19 8.01818996416 77% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 86.8835125448 41% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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