TPO 64: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more important to read or watch news presented by people whose views are different from your own than it is to read or watch news presented by those whose views are similar to your own.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Opposite views are not necessarily distressing; however, they constitute more general perceptions. There is a heated controversial among people whether it is important to pursue news by people with diversified views or not. From my personal opinion originated form education background and life experiences, I agree with the statement for two major reasons. Various views aid us finding uncovered facts and also help us planning accurately in our life.
As a threshold matter, it is miscellaneous horizon of views that let us see the realities we did not aware of in the past. In the other words, it presents us undiscovered affairs we never thought before. Consequently, it not only makes our mind fully alert and creative but also helps us to accept criticisms. As a matter of fact, those who just consider their preferred stand point would never grow neither spiritually nor intellectually because their thinking domain never exceeds farther than their own beliefs. For example, when a piece of news about a technology advance is broadcasted, there will be a lot of views toward it’s exploitations. One source of news may only points out the economical benefits the break through may has whilst the other source reveals irreparable side effects it brings about in our nature. Accordingly, both sides should be paid attention to judge the progression.
Furthermore, vividly, that planning is paramount for our life should not be refused. Being exposed to different sources of news extremely assists us to predict future issues or opportunities we might face. It is pivotal for us to be informed about various interpretation of an occurrence so as to decide correspond actions effectively. For instance, listening to various origins of news help businessmen whether they had better invest in a specific project or not. Nonetheless, by taking care of only desired news, people might get into extreme troubles.
In succinct, based on my experience and knowledge, receiving news via people whose points are different from us is highly significant owing to two main purposes. They can provide us with fact that we were not aware of and with information helping us to anticipate better in critical situations.
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- TPO 22 integrated writing task
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 233, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
... with diversified views or not. From my personal opinion originated form education background an...
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Line 1, column 421, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[9]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to plan' or 'plan'.
Suggestion: to plan; plan
...inding uncovered facts and also help us planning accurately in our life. As a threshol...
^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 692, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
... source of news may only points out the economical benefits the break through may has whil...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 289, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...various interpretation of an occurrence so as to decide correspond actions effectively. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, consequently, furthermore, however, if, may, nonetheless, so, as to, for example, for instance, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1857.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 356.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21629213483 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00076132872 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626404494382 0.524837075471 119% => OK
syllable_count: 581.4 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.2202247634 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.166666667 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7777777778 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.72222222222 5.45110844103 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17321999525 0.236089414692 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0520838657672 0.076458572812 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453163015891 0.0737576698707 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109063374056 0.150856017488 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0414302895312 0.0645574589148 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 86.8835125448 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.