TPO:
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In the modern era with advancement in the science and technology where life became eaiser for the people, on the contrary it bring some complexities. some people might believe that modern life is very simple. However, I think otherwise. I am of the opinion that modern life is very complex therefore, young people should have the ability to plan and stay organized. First, it will help to improve the quality of life. Another reason is, people can enjoy the life more.
To begin with, it is very essential for young people to have the ability to plan and stay organized as it will improve the quality of life. The competetion in life has increased ,which made life difficult for person to secure a good social status. Therefore, a person need to put their efforts everyday to maintain good life which could only be possible if he works hard according to a proper schedule. For instance, if a student wants to complete their master in science it is very important for them to follow a schedule. Despite all the other matters in their he has to priortize the tasks accordingly so they would be able to complete their studies and secure a good job .This would not have been possible if they would not worked according to a schedule and stay well organized. Therefore it is very beneficial for young people to keep up with the plan and coordiated.
In addition, having a ability in young adult to plan and stay organized help them to enjoy the life more. A person in the life is very busy because of everyday matter in the life. These matters are important part of the life and a person can not run away from it. For example, a university student goes to college everyday, then he has to study, work so he can pay off his tuition and look for his social life. In order to fulfill these tasks a student should have the ability to plan things and organized them so. if he missed any of the essential task it will be difficult for the student to keep up the pace of life. he won't be able to enjoy the life at the fullest. As a result, it is very important for young people to have the ability to plan and stay organized.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'brings'?
Suggestion: brings
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Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
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Suggestion: This
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, first, however, if, look, so, then, therefore, well, as to, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, as a result, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1733.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 389.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45501285347 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38100123276 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.416452442159 0.524837075471 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 571.5 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4641209177 48.9658058833 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.65 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.45 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 5.45110844103 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320775120781 0.236089414692 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122005929003 0.076458572812 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0965618747814 0.0737576698707 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243945914506 0.150856017488 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0278227065339 0.0645574589148 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.81 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 86.8835125448 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.