In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today
As per the given argument, car usage will be declined in next twenty years. I strongly believe in this statement. There are various evidence in the modern world which can support this hypothesis.
First of all, no doubt the population of world is growing currently. However, it will become saturate in the coming years due to various government policies in different nations. Also, earth doesn't have capability to accommodate growing number of people. In the near future, the population of humans will become stagnant rather growing exponentially. In this way, people with less number will eventually help in reducing the usage of cars. Another in some of the countries, government has started banning the use of more than one car per family. This step will not only reduce the number of cars in the roads in near future but also help in reducing the pollution of earth.
Secondly, there are various research have been conducted to replace the non-renewable energy resources like coal, petrol and diesel with renewable energy resources like solar, wind. Because of this, there could be a possibility of other mode of transportation for people with use of these renewable energy resources.
Thirdly, the reason number of cars are growing all over the world is because it is the most convenient mode of transportation of people. However, people are realizing that more number of people buying cars are creating more traffic in the city. Imagine people buying cars in future the same rate they are buying now. This can lead to the chaos in the major cities and there will be no vehicle to ride the cars. In our country, even though people have cars they park at the railway or metro station and then travel via railways.
In sum, there are positive steps being taken by the government to reduce the usage of cars as it is making the world less environment-friendly. Also, these steps are taken to control the humungous traffic in the major cities. Moreover, the recent technology will come up with more modern way of building the transport mode for people around the world. This will help in reducing the number of cars in near future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 192, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...icies in different nations. Also, earth doesnt have capability to accommodate growing ...
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Line 3, column 452, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... reducing the usage of cars. Another in some of the countries, government has started banni...
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Line 7, column 154, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...ansportation of people. However, people are realizing that more number of people buying cars ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, no doubt, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 43.0788530466 39% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1784.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 363.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91460055096 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6045021811 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.495867768595 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 560.7 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.4909895062 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.9523809524 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2857142857 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09523809524 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222536631079 0.236089414692 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0659245448875 0.076458572812 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063282593686 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121829918763 0.150856017488 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0413609211157 0.0645574589148 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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