what discovery in the last 100 years has been most beneficial for people in your country?
Since dawn of humanity, human beings have been seeking for inventing new equipment in order to facilitate life for people and offer more delightful and convenient life for every person. in this regard, as far as I am concerned, internet is a greatest invention of all time. I feel this way for great number of reasons among which increasing access to infinite information resources, improving economy and increasing a connection between people are more considerable.
To begin with, without any shadow of doubt, with internet people can have access to immense amount of information readily. For instance, I can remember before internet become popular, people must waste lots of time in order to assemble information or spend considerable amount of money to buy books about their selected subject, whereas today by clicking only a button people can have access to information about diverse subjects. Moreover, although it is true that there are fake news and inaccurate information all around the internet, one by accessing to different resources from internet, can compare information and ultimately chooses the accurate one. In contrast, in the past, because of lack of diversity in resources and information, one has lower chance to detect faulty and incorrect information. As you can see, internet has a significant impact on people’s life and improve their life appreciably.
Another privilege of internet has to with increasing connection with people. Internet paves the way for easier interaction and connection among people. As an illustration, long distance relationships, before the discovery of internet, were virtually impossible, while today the distance is not anymore an important factor in relationships because people can readily communicate through internet. In another word, internet help people to preserve their long distance relationships. in addition, social media give people this chance to become more involve in their family or friend’s life and consequently become closer with each other.
Last but not least, the impact which internet had on our economy in recent years is ineluctable. Internet gives people this chance to establish their company with limited fund, which was utterly impossible before discovery of internet. In the past, establishing new business required substantial amount of enterprises which not all people could afford it; therefore, most people were not able to have their own business. But now people have this chance to commence new business readily and by doing so, diminish unemployment immensely.
In conclusion, with all this taken into account, I strongly believe that the greatest invention of last 100 years undoubtedly is innovation of internet on the ground that internet has influenced people’s life in a positive way and help people to communicate easily. also it provides an infinite amount of resources for people to gain their knowledge; therefore, without the internet, our country as well as the whole world not be anything as it currently is.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, whereas, while, as to, for instance, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, as well as, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 77.0 52.1666666667 148% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 8.0752688172 297% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2579.0 1977.66487455 130% => OK
No of words: 471.0 407.700716846 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47558386412 4.8611393121 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65859790218 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9542164521 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 212.727598566 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511677282378 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 823.5 618.680645161 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 4.94265232975 303% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.814955116 48.9658058833 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.736842105 100.406767564 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7894736842 20.6045352989 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.63157894737 5.45110844103 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17725973265 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.057523489194 0.076458572812 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439464859958 0.0737576698707 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113629230278 0.150856017488 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0454274447583 0.0645574589148 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 11.7677419355 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 58.1214874552 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.8 10.9000537634 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 86.8835125448 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.