workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long.
In today progressive and sophisticated world where we live, career has a profound effect on individuals life. by doing job people gain monitory to have pleasant life. In this line of though, some people believe that when employer doing discrete job, feels more satisfied, while many others posit this notion, stating that people have work which is similar during the day work, feels satisfied. I, personally, concur with former group for two main reasons, on which I will elaborate in the following paragraphs.
First of all, human who has diversity of duty during the hole day, are more satisfied about their job. To be more specific, in modern era, people more than the past need to be creative and productive in their job. If workers were not being creative, they would lost the job. many studies have shown that humans need to be productive in life, we know that people spend most of the life in work environment, so job is the merely place in which people can we productive. To clarify, when individuals can feel pleasant, they will do diversity of work simultaneously. I can allude to a personal experience, when I went to university, in sophomore year I worked as a teacher part time. I enjoyed from my career and I felt satisfy it because I could teach each time different topic. But next year I revised my job and worked as an accountant in university. Therefore, I did not feel pleasant about my monotonous career and I felt regret.
Secondly, do diverse duty through the work day can improve self-confidence. People by doing different work can open up opportunity to gain vital experiences. In other words, when one do discrete job with different circumstance, which assist one to consider in any situation can do the best and built his self-confidence. For instance, doctors every day meet different patient and by gaining experience can built their self-confidence and be satisfied about himself.
To sum up, I assume that people feels more penchant, if they are to different task to do in work. Not only, diverse work help individuals to be creative, but also it is assist people to built self-confidence. As for this writer's advice, I urge adults to be informed of severe effect of their work.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
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Suggestion: By
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion: lose
...ers were not being creative, they would lost the job. many studies have shown that h...
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Suggestion: part-time
...in sophomore year I worked as a teacher part time. I enjoyed from my career and I felt sa...
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...es. In other words, when one do discrete job with different circumstance, which a...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'writers'' or 'writer's'?
Suggestion: writers'; writer's
...e to built self-confidence. As for this writers advice, I urge adults to be informed of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, as for, for instance, first of all, in other words, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1848.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 379.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87598944591 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86172055203 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527704485488 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 579.6 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0670892742 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.95 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15 5.45110844103 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256673103259 0.236089414692 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0801470938878 0.076458572812 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0742109968428 0.0737576698707 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156923003359 0.150856017488 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0211582428553 0.0645574589148 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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