In your country, is there more need for land to be left in its natural condition or is there more need for land to be developed for housing and industry? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Land is one of the four major factors of production. Land left in its natural condition seems to me like a total waste of resources for production and development. In Nigeria there’s a high percentage of undeveloped land which could be developed into houses or Industries. There should be increase in the need to develop land into houses or industries because of its importance to the advancement of our civilization.
Establishment of industries provides employment to the job seekers which in turn advances our civilization. Building of houses directly translates to increase in the need for laborers and decreases the number of jobless unskilled workers in the society. The development of land fosters high employment rate which is an important consequence of the advancement of our country.
The development of land into houses and industries also fosters trade in the country. The building of houses for example, requires the purchase of cements, blocks etc. This improves trade between the contractor and the cement trader. Also by building industries on land means there’s increase in production of materials in the country, and this develops trade between the wholesaler of the produce and the manufactures. The increase in trade within the country inspires the establishment of more businesses and improves the economy of the country.
Lastly, the development of land into industries and houses helps improve foreign exchange between our country and other countries around the world. For example industries that processes agricultural products could be established, this processed products could serve as a means of foreign exchange for the country. Also, building of refineries provides the country with the capacity to process crude oil for neighboring countries that lack the necessary infrastructure.
There’s a better reward for development of land into houses and industries than left in its natural condition. Increase in employment rate, foreign exchange, and improved trade within the country are some of the rewards, just to mention a few. These rewards prove as an advancement in our civilization and a means to a better economy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 295, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'increased'?
Suggestion: increased
...o houses or Industries. There should be increase in the need to develop land into houses...
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Line 4, column 87, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ries also fosters trade in the country. The building of houses for example, require...
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Line 4, column 235, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...n the contractor and the cement trader. Also by building industries on land means th...
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Line 8, column 206, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...d improved trade within the country are some of the rewards, just to mention a few. These r...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, lastly, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 43.0788530466 35% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 8.0752688172 297% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1838.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 337.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45400593472 4.8611393121 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10148220323 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.445103857567 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 566.1 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.8225218026 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.111111111 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7222222222 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.61111111111 5.45110844103 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.352006940698 0.236089414692 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11675314461 0.076458572812 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0874900878797 0.0737576698707 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206706435047 0.150856017488 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0751830293572 0.0645574589148 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 58.1214874552 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 10.9000537634 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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