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Both the reading and the lecture try to discuss Agnostids' behaviors and foods. As it was mentioned in the reading, Agnostids were a group of marine animals known as the primitive arthopods-relative of modern-day insects. While the reading passage states three different theories about their life, the speaker finds all there ideas dubious and brings some evidence to refute them all.
First, the reading argues that these creatures may have been good swimmers due to the fact that some kinds of primitive anthropods were able to swim strongly. As a result, they may had fed on a plenty of small organisms in the ancient ocean that were smaller than their own size. On the other hand, the professor plays up the idea that hunters need to have good, precise eyes owing to the truth that vision is an important characteristic that is necessary for hunting a prey, while these animals' eyes were poorly developed, and some types of them were fairly blind. Also, they did not have any other organ in their body to rely on it for hunting, according to the fossil records, so this idea is not convincing.
Furthermore, the author holds the view that they may be seafloor Dwellers because there are some example of their primitive anthropods that lived this way. They may had fed on bacteria or other dead organisms on the oceanfloor. In contrast, the speaker brings up the idea that seafloor Dwellers are usually slow creatures and cannot move fast, but these animals were able to move quickly due to their widespread fossl records that were occupied in diverse regions.
Last but not least, the reading passage asserts the opinion that Agnostids were parasities, which relied on other larger organism , since many modern-day anthropods live as parasities such as mites and ticks. Conversely, the speaker dismisses this idea due to the fact that these parasities are usually not large populations. If their population becomes large, they may kill the organisms that are feeding on them. Evidence found in the oceans reveals the fact that agnostids were very large populations, and vast amount of their fossils were found. This fact shows they were not parasites.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 130, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'conversely', 'first', 'furthermore', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'well', 'while', 'in contrast', 'such as', 'as a result', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.231738035264 0.261695866417 89% => OK
Verbs: 0.16120906801 0.158904122519 101% => OK
Adjectives: 0.105793450882 0.0723426182421 146% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0428211586902 0.0435111971325 98% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0453400503778 0.0277247811725 164% => OK
Prepositions: 0.108312342569 0.128828473217 84% => OK
Participles: 0.0377833753149 0.0370669169778 102% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.52987401015 2.5805825403 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0277078085642 0.0208969081088 133% => OK
Particles: 0.00503778337531 0.00154638098197 326% => OK
Determiners: 0.11838790932 0.128158765124 92% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0151133501259 0.0158828679856 95% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0176322418136 0.0114777025283 154% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2162.0 1645.83664459 131% => OK
No of words: 362.0 271.125827815 134% => OK
Chars per words: 5.97237569061 6.08160592843 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.04852973271 108% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.32044198895 0.374372842146 86% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.254143646409 0.287516216867 88% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.160220994475 0.187439937562 85% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.116022099448 0.113142543107 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52987401015 2.5805825403 98% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 145.348785872 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524861878453 0.539623497131 97% => OK
Word variations: 56.7428010978 53.8517498576 105% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0529801325 115% => OK
Sentence length: 24.1333333333 21.7502111507 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.6948043914 49.3711431718 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.133333333 132.220823453 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1333333333 21.7502111507 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.933333333333 0.878197800319 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.39072847682 29% => OK
Readability: 49.5476979742 50.5018328374 98% => OK
Elegance: 1.51515151515 1.90840788429 79% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.549887131256 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.109018399404 0.142949733639 76% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0507822442004 0.0787303798458 65% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.562703748735 0.631733273073 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.118422260993 0.139662658121 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.266732575781 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.103435571967 0% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.418765153927 0.414875509568 101% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0660587637454 0.0530846634433 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.40443939384 0% => The content is off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0528353158467 0% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.26048565121 164% => OK
Positive topic words: 2.0 3.49668874172 57% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.62251655629 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 3.1766004415 63% => OK
Total topic words: 6.0 10.2958057395 58% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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