Meerkat
altruism in human and animals, explained in passage that without expectation of benefit, it shows altruism while lecture contradicts by saying that there is no altruism because we get something in return and it is not selfless act.
this was explained by example of meerkat, a mammal, living in burrows in grassland of Africa. In passage it was said that meerkat’s behaviors as sentinel for their group and protecting them from potential predators by giving alarm cry while speaker says that guarding meerkat gets more chances of escape from predator while others gather together making them vulnerable.
In passage it was stated that sentinel animal remains hungry and he has more risk of getting caught because of alarm sound this point was denied by speaker by implying that closer and detailed study showed that altruist meerkat guards with full stomach and escapes easily. meerkat’s behavior helps other by increasing their chances of survival.
In lecture opposes writer that the person donating kidney like organ to relatives or friends showing his selfless act and in return receive appreciation from society and this becomes valuable to person. The action of donating organs also get something in return.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Altruism
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...gather together making them vulnerable. In passage it was stated that sentinel a...
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...s with full stomach and escapes easily. meerkat's behavior helps other by increasing th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.4613686534 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 5.04856512141 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 22.412803532 98% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 30.3222958057 109% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1038.0 1373.03311258 76% => OK
No of words: 195.0 270.72406181 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32307692308 5.08290768461 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 4.04702891845 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58760510844 2.5805825403 100% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 145.348785872 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635897435897 0.540411800872 118% => OK
syllable_count: 312.3 419.366225166 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.23620309051 24% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 13.0662251656 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 21.2450331126 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.2154135266 49.2860985944 179% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.285714286 110.228320801 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8571428571 21.698381199 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.14285714286 7.06452816374 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220351489301 0.272083759551 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115759263584 0.0996497079465 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106659629905 0.0662205650399 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123955568423 0.162205337803 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126191283185 0.0443174109184 285% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.3589403974 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 53.8541721854 82% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.0289183223 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.2367328918 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.42419426049 112% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 63.6247240618 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.7273730684 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.498013245 122% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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