The passage and lecture are disccusing sending people to an asteriod to be best colonization. The writer believes that is a good colonization option, he gave three resons. The lecturer casts doubt on claim made in article. Shw said, these reasons which are given in article is not properiate.
First, the author states, the asteriods have low gravity, this making landing on their surface more safer than on mooon surface, in addition make spacecraft to take off agian with less fuel. This point challenged by lecturer. She mentions, it is right that ssteriods have low gravity which prevent craft to pull strongly, but this low gravity causes muscle weakness and lead to low bone density, and if these continuce, it will effect craft health.
Second, the writor elaborate on the mining valable metal, he claims that asteroids have many cost elements which are extremely profitable and good source of raw materials, therefore the cplonists can send them to the earth. This argument rebutted by lecturer. She mentions, the profit from raw materials is not realy correct compare to the cost need to support the colonies, moreover, the money that nessecery to transport the meterial to the earth. however, there is no garenti that the price is the same as previous price.
Finally, the author illustrate that the asteroids are easlly to reach because they are closely to earth, nevertheless, they are easlly to get and get back from than the planet likr mars. In the other hand, the lecturer says, it is true that asteriods can be near the earth orbit, but some times reflect bach fin a distance farther than the distrance between the earth and mars.
The passage and lecture are disccusing sending people to an asteriod to be best colonization. The writer believes that is a good colonization option, he gave three resons. The lecturer casts doubt on claim made in article. Shw said, these reasons which are given in article is not properiate.
First, the author states, the asteriods have low gravity, this making landing on their surface more safer than on mooon surface, in addition make spacecraft to take off agian with less fuel. This point challenged by lecturer. She mentions, it is right that ssteriods have low gravity which prevent craft to pull strongly, but this low gravity causes muscle weakness and lead to low bone density, and if these continuce, it will effect craft health.
Second, the writor elaborate on the mining valable metal, he claims that asteroids have many cost elements which are extremely profitable and good source of raw materials, therefore the cplonists can send them to the earth. This argument rebutted by lecturer. She mentions, the profit from raw materials is not realy correct compare to the cost need to support the colonies, moreover, the money that nessecery to transport the meterial to the earth. however, there is no garenti that the price is the same as previous price.
Finally, the author illustrate that the asteroids are easlly to reach because they are closely to earth, nevertheless, they are easlly to get and get back from than the planet likr mars. In the other hand, the lecturer says, it is true that asteriods can be near the earth orbit, but some times reflect bach fin a distance farther than the distrance between the earth and mars.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: be the best
...cusing sending people to an asteriod to be best colonization. The writer believes that ...
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...onization option, he gave three resons. The lecturer casts doubt on claim made in a...
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Message: Use only 'safer' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: safer
...y, this making landing on their surface more safer than on mooon surface, in addition make...
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Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
...ensity, and if these continuce, it will effect craft health. Second, the writor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, so, therefore, in addition, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.4613686534 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 22.412803532 107% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 30.3222958057 99% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1373.0 1373.03311258 100% => OK
No of words: 278.0 270.72406181 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93884892086 5.08290768461 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.04702891845 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4532294985 2.5805825403 95% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 145.348785872 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622302158273 0.540411800872 115% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 419.366225166 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 3.25607064018 369% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.4397167974 49.2860985944 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.615384615 110.228320801 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3846153846 21.698381199 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06452816374 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 4.19205298013 215% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30136235367 0.272083759551 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116197141356 0.0996497079465 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.146327936338 0.0662205650399 221% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234728444574 0.162205337803 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.3308828152 0.0443174109184 747% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.3589403974 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 53.8541721854 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.0289183223 93% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.2367328918 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.42419426049 106% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 63.6247240618 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.7273730684 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.