tpo 24
Both the reading passage and the lecture point out the discovery of a dinosaur fossil. The reading passage argues scientists were finding a new fossil contain remains of the tissues of the animal, and these discoveries are so important because it gives the scientists the opportunity to study of soft tissue that has a little chance to appear after fossilization. While the professor encounters there findings as they were as animals soft tissues instead, these may be just mineral disposition.
First, the author claims the branching channels that appeared inside the fossilized leg bone, and it looks like the blood vessels were it located. However, the professor argues that by telling these channels may come from the bacteria that attack the dinosaur after damage, and these animals arranged in a row, so they appeared like channels.
Second, the article discusses the presence of spheres that may be the residue of red blood cell. Although, the speaker casts doubt on this point by explaining that their spheres also found in another primitive and these animals did not have red blood cell. So, the dinosaur even primitive animal, so these could be red mineral.
Third, the article claims the collagen found in the animal remain. Even though, the professor opposes this point by explaining that there is no animal residue found contain collagen older than a thousand year ago, so how could that possible for the dinosaur a million year ago. And this remains of collagen may be from other as the human for example when he is trying to handle the pone of that dinosaur.
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Essay evaluation report
scientists were finding a new fossil contain remains of the tissues of the animal
scientists were finding a new fossil which contains remains of the tissues of the animal
and it looks like the blood vessels were it located
and it looks like the blood vessels where they are located
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 23 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 11 12
No. of Words: 264 250
No. of Characters: 1282 1200
No. of Different Words: 135 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.031 4.2
Average Word Length: 4.856 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.37 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 96 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 73 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 39 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 19 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 24 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.081 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.909 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.376 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.463 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.102 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 2 4
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, look, may, second, so, third, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 22.412803532 112% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 30.3222958057 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1315.0 1373.03311258 96% => OK
No of words: 264.0 270.72406181 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98106060606 5.08290768461 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.04702891845 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43425665999 2.5805825403 94% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 145.348785872 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522727272727 0.540411800872 97% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 419.366225166 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.51434878587 264% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 21.2450331126 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.015860408 49.2860985944 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.545454545 110.228320801 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 21.698381199 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.36363636364 7.06452816374 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334667206845 0.272083759551 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132871792465 0.0996497079465 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600662339249 0.0662205650399 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189466818407 0.162205337803 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0209213715963 0.0443174109184 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.3589403974 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 53.8541721854 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.0289183223 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.2367328918 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.42419426049 98% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 63.6247240618 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.7273730684 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.498013245 110% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25 Out of 30
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