TPO 40 Q1
The passage states possibility and challenges to human presence on venus' surface, and illustrates its inhospitability by three reasons; however, the lecturer casts doubt on the reasons.
First, the reading avers atmospheric pressure at venus' surface which is greater than the pressure at Earth's surface, and make it impossible to be tolerated by spacecrafts and any equipments which human land on venus. Conversly, the lecturer suggests to stablish floating station above the surface of venus which has less pressure and makes opportunity to stablish human being spacecrafts be land on it.
Moreover, the text states unavailability of resorvoirs of water and oxygene which are vital factors for human survival; whereas, the professor argues inavailability of these two critical factor is not only permanent but also could be produced by chemical reactions. He explained that carbon dioxide and sulfric acid in the venus' atmosphere give this opportunity to make water and oxygen in order to consumption by human .
Finally, the reading states thick clouds make a barrier for sunlight to reach venus's surface, and it is a prevention for human to use solar power cells in order to produce electricity as a source of power for human's machines and equipment; however, the lecturer posits usage of solar energy to produce electricity would occur by placing the solar panels above these clouds, and human beings can overcome the problem.
- TPO 40 Q1 85
- Some parents offer their school-age children money for each high grade (mark) they get in school. Do you think this is a good idea? 70
- TPO 50 Q1 3
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? One of the best ways that parents can help their teenage children prepare for adult life is to encourage them to take a part-time job. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 90
- TPO 26 Q 1 76
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 420, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... oxygen in order to consumption by human . Finally, the reading states thick clo...
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Line 7, column 209, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...uce electricity as a source of power for humans machines and equipment; however, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, moreover, so, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 7.30242825607 164% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 12.0772626932 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 22.412803532 40% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 30.3222958057 106% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1212.0 1373.03311258 88% => OK
No of words: 227.0 270.72406181 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33920704846 5.08290768461 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 4.04702891845 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84559564751 2.5805825403 110% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 145.348785872 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5859030837 0.540411800872 108% => OK
syllable_count: 392.4 419.366225166 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.51434878587 264% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 13.0662251656 46% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 21.2450331126 174% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.3277669982 49.2860985944 177% => OK
Chars per sentence: 202.0 110.228320801 183% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.8333333333 21.698381199 174% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06452816374 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.376245787544 0.272083759551 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.186704948597 0.0996497079465 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0741473560495 0.0662205650399 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205978516368 0.162205337803 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0692450155579 0.0443174109184 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.6 13.3589403974 169% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.46 53.8541721854 47% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 5.55761589404 202% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 11.0289183223 171% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.2367328918 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.34 8.42419426049 123% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 63.6247240618 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.7273730684 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.498013245 160% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.2008830022 134% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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