TPO 42
The speaker completely refutes the reading passage. The speaker uses three points to indicate that none of the theories, which are mentioned in the article about birds are harmed every year from glass windows when they try to fly through them.
First, even though one-way glass will be transparent in only one direction to keep birds away from the glass, it reflects the light of the sky so the glass will be like a mirror. As a result, birds are attracted by the mirror. Then, birds will be harmed when they try to pass through windows.
Second, although painting window glass with colorful stripes would help birds to avoid flying through the glass, there would be openings between stripes. So, birds will try to fly through these holes. Also, if the holes would be small to let birds avoid them, the building would be dark inside that it is not convenient for people.
Finally, it is true that creating an artificial magnetic field would guide birds away from buildings, but birds use their magnetic fields for long distances. What it is more, birds use their eyes and lights for short distances. Hence, birds would not sense the magnetic field and would be harmed from the buildings.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2023-07-06 | Hrushikesh_Vaddoriya | 60 | view |
| 2022-08-21 | mmorteza | 80 | view |
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| 2021-11-14 | lutzuming | 80 | view |
| 2021-10-24 | Pariakarimi | 80 | view |
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, hence, if, second, so, then, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.4613686534 124% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 5.04856512141 218% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 7.30242825607 41% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 12.0772626932 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 22.412803532 62% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 30.3222958057 82% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.01324503311 20% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 997.0 1373.03311258 73% => OK
No of words: 206.0 270.72406181 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83980582524 5.08290768461 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 4.04702891845 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.16590278763 2.5805825403 84% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 145.348785872 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572815533981 0.540411800872 106% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 419.366225166 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.55342163355 84% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.23620309051 36% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.25165562914 320% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.3480695895 49.2860985944 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.6363636364 110.228320801 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7272727273 21.698381199 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.18181818182 7.06452816374 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.546268874957 0.272083759551 201% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.211378850564 0.0996497079465 212% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111516015472 0.0662205650399 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.325130119503 0.162205337803 200% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.07699342674 0.0443174109184 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.3589403974 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 53.8541721854 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.0289183223 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.2367328918 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.42419426049 86% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 63.6247240618 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.7273730684 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.