Somepeople say that tourism has many negative effects on the countries that people travel to.
How true is this statement? What can tourists do to reduce the harmful effects of tourism on local cultures and environments?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience
There is an increasingly growing popular idea that many damaging influences on cultures and environments of a country are caused by tourism. I believe this contension make sense and I will give the reasons to prove so and some solutions to reduce those situations in this essay.
A very improtant point to consider is that one of the most initial factors leading to overdevelopment is tourism. To serve more and more travellers, the tourism industry has to build more hotels, restaurants, which results in reducing natural area and deforestation. For example, instead of attractive sightseeing with...
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this contension make sense
this contention makes sense
I will give the reasons to prove so and some solutions to reduce those situations in this essay.
I will give the reasons to prove so and provide some solutions to reduce those situations in this essay.
by several effective way.
by several effective ways.
despite haveing a positive impact on the economy aspect
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Sentence: I believe this contension make sense and I will give the reasons to prove so and some solutions to reduce those situations in this essay.
Error: contension Suggestion: contention
Sentence: A very improtant point to consider is that one of the most initial factors leading to overdevelopment is tourism.
Error: improtant Suggestion: important
Error: overdevelopment Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: In conclusion, despite haveing a positive impact on the economy aspect, the drawback of tourism to local cultures and the environments cannot be denied.
Error: haveing Suggestion: having
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