In the last 20 years there have been significant developments in the field of information technology (IT), for example the World Wide Web and communication by email. However, future development in IT are likely to have more negative effects than positive. To what extent do you agree with this view?
In the last 20 years, improvement in Information Technology have been changing the way of living and communicating. Face-to-face connections are replaced by email, the easiest way until now. However, in my opinion, these changes can have negative effects, the pros outweigh the cons.
Nowadays, IT is playing a crucial role in terms of communications, especially through overseas. People or workers, do their routine everyday events or their jobs with the help of Information Technology. There are some ways of communications which have provided easiest ways of connections. Some huge organizations or companies have been using this technology to perform their operations such as NASA, Microsoft or etc. Everyday people use email to send word, communicate, or send information to others which must be done by face-to-face connection or writing a letter in the past.
On the other hand, there are some websites or some communication ways are providing illegal and unethical information or relations. Using Internet freely by children is a serious parents concern; even it can be said that, not just children, also adults can be harmed by using unethical websites. There is no way to control or no prevention way to prohibit the access of these websites. Every day, some software is produced to control the usage of websites, but those people who want to surfing these websites finally find a way to round prohibition methods. It is really not easy to deal with. Emails have made people lazy and uninterested to have a physical relation in society.
In conclusion, it must be said that the effects of advanced IT devices have been providing new ways of communication and in recent years, websites and email are a part of daily routine event. However, with the improving the moral values, at schools or in public, these improvements are essential and admirable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 252, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'provided the easiest'.
Suggestion: provided the easiest
... some ways of communications which have provided easiest ways of connections. Some huge organiza...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'however', 'really', 'so', 'in conclusion', 'such as', 'in my opinion', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.263929618768 0.247107183377 107% => OK
Verbs: 0.16715542522 0.155533422707 107% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0938416422287 0.0946595960268 99% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0351906158358 0.0501214627716 70% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0205278592375 0.0437548338989 47% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0967741935484 0.122226691241 79% => OK
Participles: 0.058651026393 0.0403226058552 145% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.99572540537 2.80594681477 107% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0293255131965 0.0326793684256 90% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0967741935484 0.0861772015684 112% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0146627565982 0.021408717616 68% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00879765395894 0.011925033212 74% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1860.0 1933.35771543 96% => OK
No of words: 303.0 316.048096192 96% => OK
Chars per words: 6.13861386139 6.12580529183 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20517956788 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.36303630363 0.374742101984 97% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.300330033003 0.28420135186 106% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.227722772277 0.203846283523 112% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.141914191419 0.137316102897 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99572540537 2.80594681477 107% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.037074148 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557755775578 0.56093040696 99% => OK
Word variations: 58.7283914763 60.7387585426 97% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0891783567 99% => OK
Sentence length: 18.9375 20.7743622355 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7568783357 49.517814964 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.25 127.492653851 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9375 20.7743622355 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.625 0.814263465372 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 48.9705033003 49.1944974215 100% => OK
Elegance: 1.88157894737 1.69124875643 111% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.445833231936 0.332605444948 134% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0917056284376 0.102741220458 89% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0735066969026 0.0668466124924 110% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.494683786697 0.534860350844 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.144829480833 0.148594505496 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.170376325725 0.134430193775 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112744169147 0.0742795772207 152% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.274685870488 0.324371583561 85% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0370658697064 0.0638462369009 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.338082901592 0.228012699653 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115617282865 0.058150111329 199% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.68436873747 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 5.90881763527 135% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.5751503006 155% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 10.4468937876 124% => OK
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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