Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
The author claims that men and women are not suited for many tasks because of the difference in physical. I would agree with the author in some aspects and disagree with his statement too.
It is true that men and women have differences in physique. But this does not mean that men and women cannot be equally suited in many tasks. Let us take examples of sport which involve physical strength that is wrestling. We know that men have greater physical strength in such competitive sports but women are also not far behind. The famous Ronda Rousey has not only achieved fame in martial arts and judo but also is the first women in the USA to win a gold at the Olympics. The World Wrestling Entertainment also supports women in wrestling by creating a Divas Division.It is not only in wrestling that women have achieved fame and success. Different sports like Cricket,Tennis,Basketball have seen both men and women performing to great extents. The year 2016 saw both the men's and women's team of West Indies winning the International T20 cricket world cup.Serena Williams won the Wimbledon 22nd time proving that women are not behind men in the sport of Tennis.
In the field of business also women are not far behind men. With their strength,ability and good composure of mind women like Alice Walton,Jackqueline Mars are the richest women in the world. In the field of acting women in the Bollywood in India have achieved tremendous success than men. Actress like Priyanka Chopra, Deepika Padukone have made it to the Hollywood film Industry. In India women were also known to face the hardships and struggle during the British Rule in India. The famous Rani Lakshmibai is known for her freedom fight in 1856.
I do agree with the author is some claims that due to the physical strength men are suited for jobs in which physical strength is required. Women are more known to be diligent for their family members which men certainly cannot be compared with. It is a women that gives birth to a child and who cares for its bright future.
I would conclude by stating that it is not necessary that men should excel in all desired fields just because of physical stature. Women are not far behind men in many fields as stated above. Hence is disagree with the author's claim in certain aspects and agree with him too
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'hence', 'if', 'so', 'it is true']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.295194508009 0.240241500013 123% => OK
Verbs: 0.1647597254 0.157235817809 105% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0663615560641 0.0880659088768 75% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0640732265446 0.0497285424764 129% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0343249427918 0.0444667217837 77% => OK
Prepositions: 0.151029748284 0.12292977631 123% => OK
Participles: 0.0480549199085 0.0406280797675 118% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.62732293195 2.79330140395 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0160183066362 0.030933414821 52% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0800915331808 0.0997080785238 80% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0114416475973 0.0249443105267 46% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0160183066362 0.0148568991511 108% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2338.0 2732.02544248 86% => OK
No of words: 405.0 452.878318584 89% => OK
Chars per words: 5.77283950617 6.0361032391 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48604634366 4.58838876751 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.288888888889 0.366273622748 79% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.20987654321 0.280924506359 75% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.145679012346 0.200843997647 73% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0765432098765 0.132149295362 58% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62732293195 2.79330140395 94% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 219.290929204 90% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488888888889 0.48968727796 100% => OK
Word variations: 53.3168429698 55.4138127331 96% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6194690265 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.4090909091 23.380412469 79% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6370223921 59.4972553346 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.272727273 141.124799967 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4090909091 23.380412469 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.318181818182 0.674092028746 47% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.21349557522 269% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 39.3967452301 51.4728631049 77% => OK
Elegance: 1.87826086957 1.64882698954 114% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.477079291049 0.391690518653 122% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.121301569382 0.123202303941 98% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0617951859419 0.077325440228 80% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.537436849852 0.547984918172 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.131725247331 0.149214159877 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.192515464834 0.161403998019 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0771311613727 0.0892212321368 86% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.385603026193 0.385218514788 100% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.116539593392 0.0692045440612 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.342998231871 0.275328986314 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451427305837 0.0653680567796 69% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.4325221239 153% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.30420353982 38% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88274336283 82% => OK
Positive topic words: 14.0 7.22455752212 194% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.66592920354 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.70907079646 148% => OK
Total topic words: 20.0 13.5995575221 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.