Some people say that the government should pay for health care and education of its citizens. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your opinion.
Health and education are considered as fundamental rights of any individual. Therefore, some people argue that the government should pay for health care and education of its inhabitants. This essay is agreed with this statement as health is the wealth of a country and education raises the economy of a nation.
Firstly, the government should pay for the health care of its citizens as health is considered as the wealth of a country. When the government pays for the bills of treatments, then people feel secure and they feel less stress. Therefore, individuals have less strain, they work more and earn more money. As a result, in return, they pay more income tax to the government. For example, in Canada, most of health care is provided free of cost to its population.
Secondly, the government should pay for the education of its citizens as education is one of the major pillars of the economy of a nation. More educated people mean more people to work which intern brings more money in the country. This helps to increase the economy. For instance, in India, now education is free till high school so that people can get some type of job.
In conclusion, I think that the government should pay for the health and provides free education to the citizens as these two are the basic roots of a wealthy nation.
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Suggestion:
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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'firstly', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'for example', 'for instance', 'i think', 'in conclusion', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.278431372549 0.247107183377 113% => OK
Verbs: 0.125490196078 0.155533422707 81% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0745098039216 0.0946595960268 79% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0313725490196 0.0501214627716 63% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0313725490196 0.0437548338989 72% => OK
Prepositions: 0.152941176471 0.122226691241 125% => OK
Participles: 0.0156862745098 0.0403226058552 39% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.61141943222 2.80594681477 93% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0196078431373 0.0326793684256 60% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.125490196078 0.0861772015684 146% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0196078431373 0.021408717616 92% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0078431372549 0.011925033212 66% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1322.0 1933.35771543 68% => OK
No of words: 229.0 316.048096192 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.77292576419 6.12580529183 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.20517956788 93% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.349344978166 0.374742101984 93% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.227074235808 0.28420135186 80% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.170305676856 0.203846283523 84% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.117903930131 0.137316102897 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61141943222 2.80594681477 93% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 176.037074148 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.449781659389 0.56093040696 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 39.6079431258 60.7387585426 65% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0891783567 81% => OK
Sentence length: 17.6153846154 20.7743622355 85% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.8433614378 49.517814964 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.692307692 127.492653851 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6153846154 20.7743622355 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.923076923077 0.814263465372 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 40.3228081962 49.1944974215 82% => OK
Elegance: 2.375 1.69124875643 140% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.430368840807 0.332605444948 129% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.151435748915 0.102741220458 147% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.09870712977 0.0668466124924 148% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.565361511362 0.534860350844 106% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.177907033349 0.148594505496 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.198680964364 0.134430193775 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127494393968 0.0742795772207 172% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.483029548475 0.324371583561 149% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0211413222649 0.0638462369009 33% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.33559292409 0.228012699653 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0645474614281 0.058150111329 111% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.68436873747 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 5.90881763527 118% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.5751503006 78% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 10.4468937876 105% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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