A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material
possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem
important.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
The 21st century is the time where people don't have time for others, where they look their own business and deal with problems of their own. In this world full of complexities and disregard, we are trying to succeed, to find our place and to exist according to personal needs and demands.
A lot of us would say, that nowadays people couldn't find true values as in the times before. Everything is the matter of material possession, abundance and connections, If you don't have money, you can forget about travelling, going out with mates and to enjoy luxurious experiences. On the other hand, those who come from the rich families can afford little pleasures like eating fine food or driving an expensive car.
The material status is, however, very important but we should not forget on traditional values we had in the past. How many people have died by sacrificing lives to save some values as the country, honour, dignity or family. Today, you are not able to see many similar cases of those who are willing to leave some things on behalf of the honour or respect. On the contrary, everyone looks his own interest and doesn't care about other people feelings. The kindness and trust are forgotten and many people create a good distance from their own origin and roots.
It might seem disheartening to have such a life, without any positive outlook or need for happiness. In addition, many of us consider the present situation as dangerous and want to change something. However, the most of us don't take any action eradicate this rude habit of indifference and cruelty.
At last, we must observe that honour must still exist on our planet as well as in our surrounding. All that we need is to find it and not let it go for nothing in the world.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'so', 'still', 'well', 'in addition', 'as well as', 'on the contrary', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.227405247813 0.247107183377 92% => OK
Verbs: 0.154518950437 0.155533422707 99% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0962099125364 0.0946595960268 102% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0291545189504 0.0501214627716 58% => OK
Pronouns: 0.064139941691 0.0437548338989 147% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.119533527697 0.122226691241 98% => OK
Participles: 0.0262390670554 0.0403226058552 65% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.46639312885 2.80594681477 88% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0320699708455 0.0326793684256 98% => OK
Particles: 0.00291545189504 0.00163938923432 178% => OK
Determiners: 0.0787172011662 0.0861772015684 91% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0204081632653 0.021408717616 95% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0174927113703 0.011925033212 147% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1756.0 1933.35771543 91% => OK
No of words: 309.0 316.048096192 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.68284789644 6.12580529183 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20517956788 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.300970873786 0.374742101984 80% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.200647249191 0.28420135186 71% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.152103559871 0.203846283523 75% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0873786407767 0.137316102897 64% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46639312885 2.80594681477 88% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.037074148 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598705501618 0.56093040696 107% => OK
Word variations: 66.903967119 60.7387585426 110% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0891783567 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.6 20.7743622355 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.9353221249 49.517814964 56% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.066666667 127.492653851 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 20.7743622355 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.733333333333 0.814263465372 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 3.99599198397 150% => OK
Readability: 40.6647249191 49.1944974215 83% => OK
Elegance: 1.50588235294 1.69124875643 89% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250348444202 0.332605444948 75% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0673984229928 0.102741220458 66% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0539948709298 0.0668466124924 81% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.534070150725 0.534860350844 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0847797925025 0.148594505496 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0994831459022 0.134430193775 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0701528184909 0.0742795772207 94% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.234196817761 0.324371583561 72% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0646803381851 0.0638462369009 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158634572075 0.228012699653 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0454632709438 0.058150111329 78% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.68436873747 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 5.90881763527 118% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.5751503006 155% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 10.4468937876 115% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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