A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
The above argument tells that in the country all the students should study the same academics until they enter into the college the author does not provide any evidence form the argument .some students will study with their interesting subjects they will go with their own planning and the other side the argument tells that they have a common entrance test for all the students to study in their respective government colleges.the author does not provide any proof in which university the students are studying either government or private.
for bit of a example the dreamed universities they have their own entrance test and different universities have different entrance test with different syllabus .the subjects are based on election the group from the student and the government have common entrance test with the same syllabus who are electing the same group .
In the primary level of the school the syllabus will be differently form according to the schools and from the secondary level of the schools the syllabus will be same for all the schools and colleges but they perform different strategies and for entrance test of under graduation in the country they follow the same curriculum for the test .and for the entrance test of dreamed universities they follow the national curriculum bu the author does not provide different states have different syllabus they follow the sate syllabus who are the students interested in central syllabus they follow the central syllabus .according to the author if they follow the same curriculum who are studying the in the rural areas they same knowledge compare who are studying in the metro cities.
Thus i would like to conclude that a national curriculum is necessary to ensure a spirit of competition among all the students of the nation but on the same hand the state must have certain regulations to modify the curriculum according to needs to provide which cannot be given to the students in the case of national curriculum.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'thus']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.27245508982 0.240241500013 113% => OK
Verbs: 0.152694610778 0.157235817809 97% => OK
Adjectives: 0.110778443114 0.0880659088768 126% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0209580838323 0.0497285424764 42% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0449101796407 0.0444667217837 101% => OK
Prepositions: 0.119760479042 0.12292977631 97% => OK
Participles: 0.0329341317365 0.0406280797675 81% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.57081343671 2.79330140395 92% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0269461077844 0.030933414821 87% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.155688622754 0.0997080785238 156% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0239520958084 0.0249443105267 96% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0179640718563 0.0148568991511 121% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1992.0 2732.02544248 73% => OK
No of words: 330.0 452.878318584 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.03636363636 6.0361032391 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.58838876751 93% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.348484848485 0.366273622748 95% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.287878787879 0.280924506359 102% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.224242424242 0.200843997647 112% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.106060606061 0.132149295362 80% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57081343671 2.79330140395 92% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 219.290929204 57% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.381818181818 0.48968727796 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 37.753783807 55.4138127331 68% => OK
How many sentences: 4.0 20.6194690265 19% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 82.5 23.380412469 353% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 186.949692431 59.4972553346 314% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 498.0 141.124799967 353% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 82.5 23.380412469 353% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.25 0.674092028746 185% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.21349557522 288% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 111.287878788 51.4728631049 216% => OK
Elegance: 1.94520547945 1.64882698954 118% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.394311862659 0.391690518653 101% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.49269461092 0.123202303941 400% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0735423279026 0.077325440228 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 1.0 0.547984918172 182% => Sentence paragraph similarity is high.
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 1.24126707662e-16 0.149214159877 0% => Sentences are similar to each other in a paragraph.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.286037104458 0.161403998019 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0936689759947 0.0892212321368 105% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.530680362488 0.385218514788 138% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0742269869682 0.0692045440612 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.286037104458 0.275328986314 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0936689759947 0.0653680567796 143% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 10.4325221239 19% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.30420353982 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88274336283 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 2.0 7.22455752212 28% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.66592920354 27% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.70907079646 37% => OK
Total topic words: 4.0 13.5995575221 29% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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