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As we know now days there are many facilites in hospitals for collect data of similar kind of patinets. This is a proper way to hold all data of similar kind of patient as a whole. This isuue mainly concern with can we give access to such data to patients? Now days doctor examnine the patient and give them medicine or treatment to the patient but sometime they didnt notedown all the symptoms of that patient nor check in thei data if there is before a patient came to hospital who has same kind of disease.
Sometime if we categorized all kind of similar data in dfifferent part,medical examination and treatment will going to easy. And if we give access to the patient to use their record they easily determined that what is the main problem in their health and they can follow the instruction which is given to the other patient.
But sometime if we give access to the patient to access the data of other patient we can easily determined the disease but by doing this somotime same kind of symptomes have different diseases which is the main disadvantage of giving access to the patients. So we have to prohibit the access of data of ailing patient.
If we give access to the patient the one benifit is we can easily determine that doctor is competent to treat that medical condition so we can measure the efficency of the doctor and also check that doctor is treating in a what kind of manner.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 364, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...atment to the patient but sometime they didnt notedown all the symptoms of that patie...
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Line 3, column 71, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , medical
... kind of similar data in dfifferent part,medical examination and treatment will going to...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 111, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'go'
Suggestion: go
...,medical examination and treatment will going to easy. And if we give access to the p...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 97, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'determine'
Suggestion: determine
...the data of other patient we can easily determined the disease but by doing this somotime ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'so', 'kind of']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.248120300752 0.240241500013 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.154135338346 0.157235817809 98% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0714285714286 0.0880659088768 81% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0375939849624 0.0497285424764 76% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0601503759398 0.0444667217837 135% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.127819548872 0.12292977631 104% => OK
Participles: 0.0225563909774 0.0406280797675 56% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.43313029442 2.79330140395 87% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0563909774436 0.030933414821 182% => Less infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.112781954887 0.0997080785238 113% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0225563909774 0.0249443105267 90% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0187969924812 0.0148568991511 127% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1407.0 2732.02544248 52% => OK
No of words: 255.0 452.878318584 56% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51764705882 6.0361032391 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.58838876751 87% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.309803921569 0.366273622748 85% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.219607843137 0.280924506359 78% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.141176470588 0.200843997647 70% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0823529411765 0.132149295362 62% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43313029442 2.79330140395 87% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 219.290929204 51% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.435294117647 0.48968727796 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 39.6236786057 55.4138127331 72% => OK
How many sentences: 9.0 20.6194690265 44% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 28.3333333333 23.380412469 121% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.2376878651 59.4972553346 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.333333333 141.124799967 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3333333333 23.380412469 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.555555555556 0.674092028746 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.21349557522 77% => OK
Readability: 50.2941176471 51.4728631049 98% => OK
Elegance: 1.58208955224 1.64882698954 96% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136489293722 0.391690518653 35% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.246319904137 0.123202303941 200% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.136549284566 0.077325440228 177% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.7021821783 0.547984918172 128% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.203491472961 0.149214159877 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0855598540227 0.161403998019 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485573015213 0.0892212321368 54% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.472958110908 0.385218514788 123% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0113177303257 0.0692045440612 16% => Paragraphs are so close to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0951112790503 0.275328986314 35% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0383544381518 0.0653680567796 59% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.4325221239 38% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.30420353982 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88274336283 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 2.0 7.22455752212 28% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 0.0 3.66592920354 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.70907079646 37% => OK
Total topic words: 3.0 13.5995575221 22% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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