Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Games are as important for adults as they are for children. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
When it comes to the issue the importance of the game, some people believe that the playing game has a constructive role in their lives, and it helps us to have a comfort life. However, others maintain the opposite view, and they think that the playing game is nothing but waste of time. As far as I am concerned, the former point carries more weight. I take this position on account for the following reasons.
The first and most cited reason is that all people enjoy the healthy life. The intellectual games such as chess, reverse enhance thinking and concentration. Physical games include indoor games like table tennis and outdoor games like football. These games not only increase blood circulation but also burn excess fat present in our body. These games keep us fresh and thus improve the quality our life.
There is also a more subtle point we must consider. Playing game, no matter you win or lose assists to release a person from heavy pressure. There is no example better than myself when I was trying so hard to enter the university. At that time, when I was too exhausted to memorize any single incident in the history book, a play of badminton would refill me with fresh energy to go back to my studies, though I won very hardly any of these badminton games, because my partner was an excellent player. Therefore, the biggest advantage of playing game lies in the fact that helps people relaxed.
Apart from the points I made above, playing games improve relationships and your connection to others. Sharing laughter and fun can foster empathy, compassion, trust, and intimacy with others. I think that a small example can give some light on this topic. It is a custom in family to get together on weekends and play the backgammon. A few years ago, I had some disagreements with my father, and we had not spoken with each other for several days. On the weekend, playing backgammon with my family, especially my dad, makes intimacy atmosphere and eliminates annoyances. All in all, playing with romantic partner, friends, co-workers, and children makes you feel better and affect your relationship positively.
Unfortunately, today’s we are witnessing that video game makers pay more attention to produce violence games. It is a great predicament for family. On the one hand, teenagers spend plenty of time to play these games. Surely, they will not be success at the school, because they will not devote sufficient time to study. On the other hand, they do not reach mental maturity, and sometimes they want to transmit the rules of a game into reality. It may be horrible. Nevertheless, no one can claim that all games are harmful. It is an obligation for every parent to give their children awareness of games, which are unsuitable for their ages.
Taking into account all of these factors, we may reach the conclusion that the playing game obviously relives our stresses, improves our relationship, and increases physical activities. Of course, as an English proverb goes “coin has two sides,” those who take the opposite view are partly reasonable that some games like video game increase violence among juveniles. Nonetheless, I think that its benefits outweigh dangers. Last but not least, let us hope the next generation detects purposes of playing game, and avoids of violence games.
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , &apos
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'nevertheless', 'nonetheless', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'apart from', 'as to', 'i think', 'of course', 'such as', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.246511627907 0.229887763892 107% => OK
Verbs: 0.145736434109 0.158761421928 92% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0806201550388 0.0866891130778 93% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0480620155039 0.046263068375 104% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0713178294574 0.0685040099705 104% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0992248062016 0.118717715034 84% => OK
Participles: 0.0186046511628 0.0351676179071 53% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.63417825609 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0217054263566 0.0309702414327 70% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.100775193798 0.0887237588012 114% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0139534883721 0.0209618222197 67% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0077519379845 0.0139019557991 56% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3329.0 2387.08602151 139% => OK
No of words: 561.0 408.028673835 137% => OK
Chars per words: 5.93404634581 5.86048508987 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.86676880123 4.48200974243 109% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.344028520499 0.338922669872 102% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.260249554367 0.251872472559 103% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.169340463458 0.174417080927 97% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0998217468806 0.112833075102 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63417825609 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 308.0 212.727598566 145% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549019607843 0.524397521467 105% => OK
Word variations: 69.934929894 59.2087087015 118% => OK
How many sentences: 33.0 20.6684587814 160% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5533526081 83% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0873174893 48.84282405 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.878787879 120.699889404 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.5533526081 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.515151515152 0.644075263715 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.5376344086 132% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 43.0249554367 45.7405998639 94% => OK
Elegance: 1.37426900585 1.45489161554 94% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277670047349 0.300154397459 93% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0641701171807 0.103427244359 62% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0620512265221 0.0752933317313 82% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.432507829076 0.497263757937 87% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.136579284278 0.151897553556 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0791914787887 0.114077575197 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457542459026 0.0781384742642 59% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.200149608153 0.336927656856 59% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0462532966383 0.067059652881 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158583383124 0.210909579961 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0497132921309 0.0618886996521 80% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8870967742 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.86379928315 311% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.91756272401 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 14.0 8.42114695341 166% => OK
Negative topic words: 8.0 2.4623655914 325% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 24.0 13.6433691756 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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