The most important aspect of a job is the money a person earns. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
While in the past the most essential facet of a vocation used to be the amount of money people could earn out of it, the recent decades has seen a rise in the importance of other aspects which come along with a job. However, although there are many important factors for a job to make it attractive to the potential candidates, I strongly believe that financial issue is still the most important one.
The most appealing factors for a job, aside money matters, are job satisfaction, continued employment, and capabilities of promotion. Being interested and enthusiastic about what a person does at work is playing an important role in general content that one has in their vocation. It goes without saying that people prefer to love the kind of job that they are doing rather than being forced to do it. Another important item is having a secure job. They do opt for a permanent job if possible instead of choosing a job which they cannot rely on it for their living long-term. The last but not the least important item is promotion. Like in every other aspects of their life, people are interested to progress in their jobs and would definitely consider this capability when choosing their career.
Apart from aforementioned facets of jobs, the amount of money is the most crucial item in selecting and persisting in a career. In view of the fact the money is a very fundamental part of social life today, people are basing their career life on earning enough money on which they can lead a happy life. For example, if there is a job vacancy in rural areas offering a high salary, there will be far more candidate for it than a job with low salary in the town. It has been proven that although there are many items people take into consideration when choosing their vocation, the most important one is always financial benefits that the job can offer them.
To sum up, . It has been proven that although there are many items people take into consideration when choosing their vocation, the most important one is always financial benefits that the job can offer them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'still', 'thus', 'while', 'apart from', 'for example', 'in general', 'kind of', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.212658227848 0.247107183377 86% => OK
Verbs: 0.159493670886 0.155533422707 103% => OK
Adjectives: 0.101265822785 0.0946595960268 107% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0556962025316 0.0501214627716 111% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0582278481013 0.0437548338989 133% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.149367088608 0.122226691241 122% => OK
Participles: 0.0506329113924 0.0403226058552 126% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.55363924079 2.80594681477 91% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0177215189873 0.0326793684256 54% => OK
Particles: 0.00253164556962 0.00163938923432 154% => OK
Determiners: 0.0987341772152 0.0861772015684 115% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0177215189873 0.021408717616 83% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0177215189873 0.011925033212 149% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2079.0 1933.35771543 108% => OK
No of words: 365.0 316.048096192 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.69589041096 6.12580529183 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.20517956788 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.284931506849 0.374742101984 76% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.205479452055 0.28420135186 72% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.156164383562 0.203846283523 77% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.106849315068 0.137316102897 78% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55363924079 2.80594681477 91% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.037074148 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.490410958904 0.56093040696 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 51.7475539763 60.7387585426 85% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0891783567 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.3333333333 20.7743622355 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.3358138998 49.517814964 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.6 127.492653851 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 20.7743622355 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.8 0.814263465372 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 44.8812785388 49.1944974215 91% => OK
Elegance: 1.50925925926 1.69124875643 89% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.35378504671 0.332605444948 106% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0805558805073 0.102741220458 78% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0795854963757 0.0668466124924 119% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.501032977213 0.534860350844 94% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.185413140356 0.148594505496 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.159270715164 0.134430193775 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0806311396138 0.0742795772207 109% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.462945322859 0.324371583561 143% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0338202337458 0.0638462369009 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.272956505618 0.228012699653 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0698696185723 0.058150111329 120% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.68436873747 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41683366733 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 5.90881763527 152% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 10.4468937876 115% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.