What is the best invention of this century, computer, airplane or antibiotics?
As the 21st century continues to unfold, the issue of choosing the best invention among computer, antibiotics and airplane has sparked controversy, which leads to a moot question "what is the most beneficial innovation for the human being?" Although contested by many, a substantial number of people hold true to the idea that computers revolutionized our lifestyle, which I opt to support vigorously. Taking advantage of some academic evidence, I will corroborate this view before drawing a reasoned conclusion.
From a social point of view, the advent of computers is indeed bound to modernization of different aspects of our lives, which means it might lead to the widespread use of electronic devices among people. For example, a group of reputable scientists, working at a prestigious university, conducted a longitudinal study to understand the relationship between computer and the recent changes in our society. The research findings revealed that computers alone are responsible for 80 percent of advancements made in our community today. Therefore, the great positive impacts of this hardware are quite evident.
From an economic perspective, computers are undoubtedly attributed to more production and job opportunities. Commentators are of the view that computers played a vital role in boosting the quality and quantity of products in our industrial societies. From their point of view, if we did not have computers, the technological advances would not be possible. Thus, it is clear that computer technology is deserved to be selected as the best invention of this century.
To recapitulate, while there are persuasive arguments in favor of other inventions, I strongly believe that beneficial effects of computers in both social and economic aspects are far greater than other mentioned findings.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, thus, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1552.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54285714286 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21603127206 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632142857143 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.5110376357 49.4020404114 183% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.090909091 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4545454545 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36363636364 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166897990254 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0541785411741 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0909886340738 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0861904310709 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0862003414091 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 50.2224549098 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.29 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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