Will modern technology such as the internet ever replace book or the written words as the main source of information.
We live in technological era, in which internet plays vital role. There are many source of information such as book, news paper or novels. Now, from look at development of technology, people will take more interest to read information from internet.
First of all, evolution of technology has been swelled in all sectors. Folk can get more knowledge from internet at their convenience time. Moreover we don’t have to carry weight of book at some place, because of internet. Technology gives information more clear compare to books or any other written materials. There are also facilities of watch live news within a second. In short, internet is a showroom of information.
Albeit, because of internet, we not only adjust the font of information, but also we can translate one into another language. We can read lots of information at a one place and one time. Internet gives more clear news compare to newspaper or ant reading materials, due to the quality of pictures. The information made in internet with a colour so we can more enjoy reading information.
On the flip side, internet has certain cons also. First it needs electricity to run or its expensive compare to books or written words. If, internet replace the book in future, then price of internet will be huge. News paper has also their great side such as, we can physically touch the words. We can elaborate the main heading from the newspaper or any other written words. But, internet can give more information compare to offline material.
To pen down, I would like to say that, offline material can give pleasure to reader but interest will replace book or any other material, because of interest of reader. Furthermore, we will also save the tress in future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 77, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun source seems to be countable; consider using: 'many sources'.
Suggestion: many sources
...ch internet plays vital role. There are many source of information such as book, news paper...
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Line 1, column 82, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'sources'?
Suggestion: sources
...ternet plays vital role. There are many source of information such as book, news paper...
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Line 1, column 118, Rule ID: NEWS_PAPER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'newspaper'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
Suggestion: newspaper
...any source of information such as book, news paper or novels. Now, from look at developmen...
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Line 2, column 141, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...rom internet at their convenience time. Moreover we don't have to carry weight of b...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...internet is a showroom of information. Albeit, because of internet, we not only...
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Line 4, column 46, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...he flip side, internet has certain cons also. First it needs electricity to run or i...
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Line 4, column 167, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...en words. If, internet replace the book in future, then price of internet will be huge. N...
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Line 4, column 215, Rule ID: NEWS_PAPER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'newspaper'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
Suggestion: Newspaper
...e, then price of internet will be huge. News paper has also their great side such as, we c...
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Line 5, column 211, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...urthermore, we will also save the tress in future.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'furthermore', 'if', 'look', 'moreover', 'second', 'so', 'then', 'well', 'in short', 'such as', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.277286135693 0.247107183377 112% => OK
Verbs: 0.12389380531 0.155533422707 80% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0796460176991 0.0946595960268 84% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0442477876106 0.0501214627716 88% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0412979351032 0.0437548338989 94% => OK
Prepositions: 0.12389380531 0.122226691241 101% => OK
Participles: 0.0206489675516 0.0403226058552 51% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.68788414575 2.80594681477 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0324483775811 0.0326793684256 99% => OK
Particles: 0.00294985250737 0.00163938923432 180% => OK
Determiners: 0.0589970501475 0.0861772015684 68% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0383480825959 0.021408717616 179% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00294985250737 0.011925033212 25% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1742.0 1933.35771543 90% => OK
No of words: 294.0 316.048096192 93% => OK
Chars per words: 5.92517006803 6.12580529183 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20517956788 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.312925170068 0.374742101984 84% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.272108843537 0.28420135186 96% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.180272108844 0.203846283523 88% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.122448979592 0.137316102897 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68788414575 2.80594681477 96% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.037074148 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534013605442 0.56093040696 95% => OK
Word variations: 54.2848454763 60.7387585426 89% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0891783567 131% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.7743622355 67% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.4531966178 49.517814964 55% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.9523809524 127.492653851 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 20.7743622355 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 0.814263465372 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 3.99599198397 225% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 41.2108843537 49.1944974215 84% => OK
Elegance: 2.01408450704 1.69124875643 119% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.396505207685 0.332605444948 119% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0852720226452 0.102741220458 83% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.106653011965 0.0668466124924 160% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.470778211715 0.534860350844 88% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.125932308358 0.148594505496 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135034945621 0.134430193775 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0810471516539 0.0742795772207 109% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.37932083762 0.324371583561 117% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0412529617004 0.0638462369009 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.244303744817 0.228012699653 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0985902020724 0.058150111329 170% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.68436873747 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.41683366733 293% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 9.0 5.90881763527 152% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 8.0 1.9629258517 408% => Less neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 18.0 10.4468937876 172% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.