Every individual in a society has a responsibility to obey just laws and to disobey and resist unjust laws.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
Laws are made for the people and ensure betterment of individuals.
It is the responsibility of citizens to abide by the rules Government has enforced .However it is equally important to resist unjust laws and voice out opinion against it.
Admittedly every nation works for development an improvement of citizens.The laws and rules formulated by Government ensure justice for every citizen irrespective of caste/creed/religion.
One can be a responsible citizen of country if he/she strictly follows the rules all its rules.For eg. Income tax law in most countries assures tax incursion on income of people.
Certainly people with higher income pay higher taxes compared to people with lesser income.This warranties financial equality of people.
Furthermore people believe in Government if it ensures justice for everyone.People will obey laws only if they feel they are right and just.
Both people as well as Government can benefit here.To demonstrate this consider traffic rules. They are made for security of travellers.
Person can travel safely if obeys all rules on road.Breaching the rules can entail u pay fine and also attracts unwanted fatal risks.
While it is necessary for everyone to obey just laws it is equally important to resist unjust laws.
Individuals should stand up against the Government it they feel a particular law doesn't confirm justice for everyone.
For eg.If a law/rule goes against the environment and involves destruction of wildareas at a certain location for construction of new commercial centre,
environmentalists or even social activists can protest against such laws to protect the mother nature.
It is duty of Government to validate the laws before enforcing it on citizens.
All things considered laws a country can be hailed if its laws prove beneficial to everyone as well as can be criticised severely if provokes unjust feeling in citizens.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'well', 'while', 'even so', 'as well as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.305732484076 0.240241500013 127% => OK
Verbs: 0.165605095541 0.157235817809 105% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0732484076433 0.0880659088768 83% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0541401273885 0.0497285424764 109% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0477707006369 0.0444667217837 107% => OK
Prepositions: 0.149681528662 0.12292977631 122% => OK
Participles: 0.0414012738854 0.0406280797675 102% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.14782272252 2.79330140395 113% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0254777070064 0.030933414821 82% => OK
Particles: 0.0031847133758 0.0016655270985 191% => OK
Determiners: 0.0668789808917 0.0997080785238 67% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0286624203822 0.0249443105267 115% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.0148568991511 0% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1906.0 2732.02544248 70% => OK
No of words: 298.0 452.878318584 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.39597315436 6.0361032391 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.58838876751 91% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.43288590604 0.366273622748 118% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.322147651007 0.280924506359 115% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.221476510067 0.200843997647 110% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.161073825503 0.132149295362 122% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14782272252 2.79330140395 113% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 219.290929204 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560402684564 0.48968727796 114% => OK
Word variations: 58.8497229117 55.4138127331 106% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6194690265 73% => OK
Sentence length: 19.8666666667 23.380412469 85% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.0178571297 59.4972553346 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.066666667 141.124799967 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8666666667 23.380412469 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.6 0.674092028746 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 14.0 4.94800884956 283% => There are something wrong with the essay format.
Language errors: 14.0 5.21349557522 269% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 52.0814317673 51.4728631049 101% => OK
Elegance: 1.85714285714 1.64882698954 113% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300112840898 0.391690518653 77% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0978278298477 0.123202303941 79% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0716251958072 0.077325440228 93% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.897979269368 0.547984918172 164% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.186556465674 0.149214159877 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118566257038 0.161403998019 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0725005869333 0.0892212321368 81% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.112301040351 0.385218514788 29% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0454739661184 0.0692045440612 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13017136817 0.275328986314 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0634153933956 0.0653680567796 97% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.4325221239 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.30420353982 113% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88274336283 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 8.0 7.22455752212 111% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 3.66592920354 164% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.70907079646 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 14.0 13.5995575221 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.