The better way to relax and reduce stress is by spending some time alone. Do you agree or disagree?
A various of people use their time differently to relax their stresses. Some might reduce their stresses by being alone, whereas others might be involving other activities such as exercises to reduce the stresses. Even though the time alone would be the easiest way to release the stresses, the actual stresses level would not be reduced because the stress level can be reduced by physical activities.
The way of releasing stresses might be based on the external factors such as cultural, peer groups and backgrounds, and the genetic factors. Some people could affect by genetic factors while others might affect by their backgrounds. Amongst young group, the release of stresses can be affected by their peer groups and the backgrounds while the elders can reduce the stresses by travelling. Like this, the release of stresses can be dependent upon various factors.
The most common way to relax and reduce stresses by being alone. If people have insufficient time or other various reasons for not able to travel, alone would be the perfect way to relax. Being alone can be the effective way to reduce stresses since it does not require time, money and other materials which can be used for travelling. However, the actual stresses level would not be reduced by being alone.
The physical body would be relaxed for doing nothing at home or having a complete privacy. However, the actual stresses would not be reduced, because the stresses are affecting the mind and it can only be reduced by physical activities. When the body is exhausted, the chemical substances such as dopamine will be relieve to tackle all the stresses levels. Thus, the physical exercises would be the only way to reduce the stresses.
In conclusion, although being alone would be beneficial for those people who are having the insufficient time, the actual stress level will not relieve. The relieve of stresses will require of chemical substances which are created by the physical activities. Even though there are various activities to release of stresses, the most effective way would be the physical activity involving.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
... the genetic factors. Some people could affect by genetic factors while others might affe...
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Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...t by genetic factors while others might affect by their backgrounds. Amongst young group,...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...by their peer groups and the backgrounds while the elders can reduce the stresses...
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...e actual stress level will not relieve. The relieve of stresses will require of chemical su...
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Discourse Markers used:
['however', 'if', 'so', 'thus', 'whereas', 'while', 'in conclusion', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.213157894737 0.247107183377 86% => OK
Verbs: 0.184210526316 0.155533422707 118% => OK
Adjectives: 0.107894736842 0.0946595960268 114% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0552631578947 0.0501214627716 110% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0184210526316 0.0437548338989 42% => OK
Prepositions: 0.1 0.122226691241 82% => OK
Participles: 0.0684210526316 0.0403226058552 170% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.53578089957 2.80594681477 90% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0263157894737 0.0326793684256 81% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.105263157895 0.0861772015684 122% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0631578947368 0.021408717616 295% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.0105263157895 0.011925033212 88% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2104.0 1933.35771543 109% => OK
No of words: 346.0 316.048096192 109% => OK
Chars per words: 6.08092485549 6.12580529183 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20517956788 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.387283236994 0.374742101984 103% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.28901734104 0.28420135186 102% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.196531791908 0.203846283523 96% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0982658959538 0.137316102897 72% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53578089957 2.80594681477 90% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.037074148 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.384393063584 0.56093040696 69% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 38.600125918 60.7387585426 64% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0891783567 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.2222222222 20.7743622355 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8472410564 49.517814964 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.888888889 127.492653851 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2222222222 20.7743622355 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.444444444444 0.814263465372 55% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 3.99599198397 125% => OK
Readability: 48.1239563263 49.1944974215 98% => OK
Elegance: 1.47959183673 1.69124875643 87% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292736385417 0.332605444948 88% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.177319858743 0.102741220458 173% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0629654832884 0.0668466124924 94% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.637839278927 0.534860350844 119% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.119181413309 0.148594505496 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147269990222 0.134430193775 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.073630174263 0.0742795772207 99% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.450850693895 0.324371583561 139% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.091991111763 0.0638462369009 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217809634688 0.228012699653 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.058784278668 0.058150111329 101% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.68436873747 46% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 5.90881763527 51% => OK
Negative topic words: 10.0 2.5751503006 388% => Less negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 10.4468937876 134% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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