Tobacco, mainly in the form of cigarettes, is one of the most widely-used drugs in the world. Over a billion adults legally smoke tobacco every day. The long term health costs are high- for smokers themselves, and for the wider community in terms of health care costs and lost productivity.
Do governments have a legitimate role to legislate to protect citizens from the harmful effects of their own decisions to smoke, or are such decisions up to the individual?
Tobacco is one of the most widely-used drugs of the world. Over a billion adults legally smoke tobacco
every day. Tobacco is slowing taking a billion people in the world towards doom. The long term health
costs are high for smokers, who suffer from various heart and lung diseases, reduced concentration
and continually diminishing immunity.
Non-smokers, accompanying smokers or those who are in their close vicinity, also become “Passive”
smokers and bear the toll of various inevitable diseases as they inhale the smoke which has an illeffect
on their respiratory systems. Thus, the health costs are high—for smokers themselves, and for
wider community in terms of health care costs and lost productivity.
There has been awareness among people from many years, about the ill-effects of smoking and
various campaigns run by the government, NGOs and local bodies to encourage people to quit
smoking but the result have not been impressive. The solution is to nip the problem in the bud. School
authorities and parents should keep a close eye so that children don’t start to smoke because they
think it is “cool”. They should be made aware about the harmful effects of smoking.
Government could play a vital role too. Smoking should not be high-hand in advertisements and movie
commercials which have a huge impact on people. It could levy high taxes on tobacco products to
keep people away from its reach. Rules for checking children buying such products should be made
stringent.
The onus to protect from such products also lie on individuals as will-power always does the trick. The
knowledge of importance of being healthy has to be realized from within. It goes a long way to check
the problem. Thus, the solution requires both legitimate action of Government and strong individual
decisions to eliminate the problem.
- The line graph below shows the percentage of tourists to England who visited four different attractions in Brighton. 61
- The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (C02) emissions per person in United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. 73
- A society develops the technology in communicating devices rapidly such as smart phones, tablets and other communicating devices. Some people claims that the disadvantages of such device outweigh the advantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 67
- In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food To what extent do you agree or disagree with 92
- News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we become used to bad news? Would it be better if more good news was reported? 78
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'so', 'thus', 'as to']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.27485380117 0.247107183377 111% => OK
Verbs: 0.166666666667 0.155533422707 107% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0877192982456 0.0946595960268 93% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0350877192982 0.0501214627716 70% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0292397660819 0.0437548338989 67% => OK
Prepositions: 0.105263157895 0.122226691241 86% => OK
Participles: 0.0497076023392 0.0403226058552 123% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.89324142852 2.80594681477 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0263157894737 0.0326793684256 81% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0906432748538 0.0861772015684 105% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0175438596491 0.021408717616 82% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0116959064327 0.011925033212 98% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1868.0 1933.35771543 97% => OK
No of words: 299.0 316.048096192 95% => OK
Chars per words: 6.2474916388 6.12580529183 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20517956788 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.374581939799 0.374742101984 100% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.280936454849 0.28420135186 99% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.1872909699 0.203846283523 92% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.133779264214 0.137316102897 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89324142852 2.80594681477 103% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.037074148 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595317725753 0.56093040696 106% => OK
Word variations: 65.4608004967 60.7387585426 108% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0891783567 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.6111111111 20.7743622355 80% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.2163067715 49.517814964 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.777777778 127.492653851 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6111111111 20.7743622355 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.277777777778 0.814263465372 34% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 20.0 4.38877755511 456% => There are something wrong with the essay format.
Language errors: 0.0 3.99599198397 0% => OK
Readability: 44.7047565961 49.1944974215 91% => OK
Elegance: 1.86075949367 1.69124875643 110% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.566885354695 0.332605444948 170% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.097364934461 0.102741220458 95% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0604501840207 0.0668466124924 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.701233838271 0.534860350844 131% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.250120400428 0.148594505496 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.20404399562 0.134430193775 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.150213128037 0.0742795772207 202% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.0939831331369 0.324371583561 29% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0657206087502 0.0638462369009 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184225060233 0.228012699653 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.149505728032 0.058150111329 257% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.68436873747 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.41683366733 146% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 5.90881763527 51% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.5751503006 116% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 1.9629258517 204% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 10.4468937876 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.